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Make sure to thumbs up/down, if enough people like it i might throw on a bonus chapter, or possible sequel with twice the debauchery.
I am not trying to criticize your work because I enjoyed reading this yet you do need to fix this mistake that kept popping up.
in the sentence below the letter ( i ) is supposed to be capitalized not lower case. other than that this was a very wonderful story.
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Thanks for pointing that out! It will be fixed in a jiffy.
*edit
Fixed! I remembered to do that for the second half but not the first half, woopsie daisy. Thanks for the candid response!
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Wow, well thank you. Please do finish all of it before commenting again. I would love to hear your thoughts at the end. The sex tag is there for a reason but i threw in as much fluff and jokes as i could without slowing down the story. Second half is way more nsfw obviously.
I already know this is going to be a good story because the authors note made me laugh.
Short description says Pinkie Pie gets her "just deserts." Gotta have two S's in there. "Just desserts" is the correct format.
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If we're pointing out errors, it's spelled "Pinkie", not "Pinky", unless it's some kind of nickname or something.
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Thanks, can't believe i didn't catch that. >.> Stupid short description.
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By the time i noticed it i had used it like 50 times so i just ran with it. If i ever do a sequel or a bonus chapter i will fix this.
What the hay have I just read so far? (also, surprise alicorn dong?!)
7524978 Right! Two esses in 'dessert', because everyone likes a second helping of dessert!
This... this was hilariously bonkers.
x_x cant stand the Pinky thing. Good story so far, but it got too grating.
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FIxed. Although i dont see why you guys care so much its pronounced the same either way.
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Kickass, thanks!
7529967 I mean, it bugs me a bit when it's spelled with a Y, but beyond that it's not an issue, spell it however you like.
That was beyond I hope Twi gets a herd.!!!!!!!
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Well at least one person is going to be excited for the next chapter.
>close to her sensitive rejoin
-region
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Spotted and fixed thanks.
If this gets a 100 likes and there is interest i might make a sequel.
7564390 git on it
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It is added to the list!
Damn that's a huge cock.
I greatly enjoyed this
7643553 sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal!
as you can tell i really want a sequal!
random fast reader
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I have only the barest of outlines for the sequel but its in the works.
7692104 yay yay note in the works is better than it is never going to happen!!!
The premise was ridiculous(very much so), the fuckfest was nice, some headcanons resonated quite well for me, I think we already had a talk about kinks present in there, and this so needs polishing. There is a number of jarring moments purely because of how they were worded or some such, and some inconsistencies, but otherwise it was really nice
Will patiently await sequel
Would have loved more details on that out of view blowjob, that is all.
You're good at smut ;3 I'll be waiting for next chapter/sequel. Best part was the blowjob, kinda spoiled the redt but not too much. Hope you find someone to correct spelling mistakes though.
...more Than she can...
...before Then, she...
Need to fix your 'than's into 'then's.