Imma just weird girl who likes ponies and writing stories! ...mostly horror stories but what the hay :3 I have a deviantart, teh names is eeveeglaceon! http://eeveeglaceon.deviantart.com/
A Long Time ago, The Mane 6 Defeated Nightmare Moon and the Darkness inside Princess Luna is gone.
Or.... was it?
Sweetie Belle comes across piece of that defeated from that night long ago. She decides to keep it. But what she doesn't know is that, the Darkness is still there, waiting for it's next host. Will history repeat it's self? Will Princess Luna help stop the Darkness that once control her?
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it should be "She started to trot away"
Other than that, great start! I am looking forward to future updates!
Honk :o)
remember to use apostrophes when saying it's someone's or any thing like that. other than that great job!
Also perhaps SB could reform NM
ITS ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but y u do dis? cliffhangers aren't fun ya know
Love the fact that it's back, but hate the fact that it's on a cliffhanger and a good bit of the grammatical errors that really throw me off.
Other than that, YAY! the story has finally returned!
Great chapters so far.
Going a little fast paced in my opinion, and the grammar could use some work, but I still enjoy the story.
shits about to go down
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Is it one of the songs from Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde?
Something isn't right here
hello darkness my old friend
This story is good but the grammar good use some work