• Member Since 30th Apr, 2012
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Shadowbane


Comments ( 79 )

A good start! Looking forward to future chapters! :)

I will have to read this when I get the time. I am really busy right now. It sucks. Massively. Also I have writers block. -_-

792011
You're about to read a decent enough story.:pinkiehappy:

790885
CONSIDER IT GRABBED FOR ALL ETERNITY, MUAHAHA :trollestia:
791110
I hope you are! 'Cause.. I'm actually kinda gettin' into this story..
791810
I noticed by your blogs ~
792011
WE'RE WEIRD, OKAY?!
792707
Sad?
...
OKEE, whatever makes it a better story :rainbowwild:

792171
Also, do you have a better title picture in mind?
The one now was selected on a whim.

:facehoof: I read a couple paragraphs in, but I couldn't keep going. The main character is someone that is very unlikeable to me.

795880
There's two main characters. Switch to the other if you dislike the first.

794464
i know, i'm weird too. :pinkiesmile: (heart problems FTL)
BTW, what i meant was this: due to the method you are using to write it, where you show one POV for the first half, then the second, its a little confusing for me.

when can we expect moar? im really into the first two chapters. keep up the great work!:yay:

796454
Yeah, we can't really figure out any other way to do it - that method is the least confusing one.

796887
I guess whenever me and Dovah begin to write it, eh? We normally get chapters done in a day or two once we start it - we actually finished the second chapter on the day it was rejected for the first time.

795880
I know. I'm a real bastard in real life.

799118
wow... if that was the least confusing *begins to imagine what other methods you could have come up with, has a mental blowout* :derpyderp2:

796454
How is that confusing? It's pretty simple if you think about it.

Is this confusing? Too me it's not. Shadow is asking to change it from first-person to 3rd. Thoughts?
Also, think of Shadow's guy as a "typical brony that is just going to dick around in Ponyville" while my guy will take things a little bit more seriously. By that I mean he will be freaking out about how to get home or just living in a cartoon but don't worry he won't be a killjoy or ballbuster.
Thoughts?:rainbowwild:

867430
No no, I only meant the chapter we're on and any other chapters where H and Z have conversation. Then when they leave each other we can go back to split.
And.. my guy hasn't even fully realized he's in Ponyville yet. He got shot in the head.
SHOT IN THE HEAD.
Obviously he's going to think he has brain damage and thinks he's hallucinating.

878807
Ok first: Please release new chapters soon. Second: Stop spoiling the story!!!! That's no good!!

Bronydragon:moustache:

888608
Why don't you tell Dovah that?!
He's the bro spoiling the plot!

888900
Sorry for that. I was writing to Dovah too when my computer broke down.
867430
Stop spoiling the fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2:
Thank you:twilightsmile:

Bronydragon:moustache:

888900
Go eat a grilled dick sandwich, you faggot.

888921
Don't worry. My character will have some 'fun' with the characters.

889011
889819
Guys instead of fighting all over each other why don't you just go on making new chapters?
Please?:fluttercry:
Afterall this is a world of peace and friendship. :ajsmug::yay::pinkiesmile::rainbowwild::raritywink::twilightsmile:
So go on writing. I'm awaiting my stomach to hurt like never before in my life. :rainbowlaugh:

Bronydragon:moustache:

894183
Pfft, if this is a world of peace and friendship, I'm a pony.
*checks hands*
..
*sighs*
Nope, don't have hooves..

894428
I haven't spoken of this world, but of the one in our dreams and hopes that never dies out as long as one single brony is living out there.
:yay::yay::yay:

Bronydragon:moustache:

894478
Why are you putting "Bronydragon :moustache:" on every comment you post?
894428
When are we writing 4? You know what I'm gonna write my part right now.

894897
It's like a watermark or trademark for myself. I know a bit weird, but judge me if you want I don't care.
For you writing your chapter right now. GO GO GO GO GO GO GO!!!!!!

Bronydragon:moustache:

894897
You faggot.
WE'RE ALL IN THIS TOGETHER
*cue shitty High School Musical remake*

894897
897720
Stop arguing the fuck out of each other and start working together.
This story is really good and I would be very diappointed of both of you,
if you just sat there throwing shit at each other, going nowhere with your story.
So stick together and write some good stuff to read.
Sorry for the harsh words, but you two really act like little kids fighting about a toy.
No offens thou.

Bronydragon:moustache:

I cant feel my toes.
Sorry but the lemons made me do it.
*Pulls out orb* Who likes my orb of fates destiny. I borrowed it from.Pinkie. cool huh?

919065
Yo bro, we're only teasing.
948838
.. I'm gonna use those lemons to burn your house down.
/shot for Portal reference

953586
Teasing costs time. Time you could use writing the story.
Sorry for being so annoying, but the story is just too good.

Bronydragon:moustache:

953669
Don't worry, words aren't time. Actions are. When we get together, we write stories. When we aren't, the one currently online may decide to pester the other. Simple as that. It'd only be a waste if Dovah and I were both on and did nothing.

953697
Oh, when it's like that.
Iwanna play a game.
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May the best comment of the both of you win. :pinkiecrazy:

Bronydragon:moustache:

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