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Michael Hudson
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Michael Hudson
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Eh...this whole choice thing just seems like an excuse for Sunset to act OOC.
Huh, curious where this will go.
Just curious, but is there any special meaning to the four choice-letters (x/o/v/y)?
Also, why did you already tag this as "small breasts" in the boobies-group?
Going by the cover-art, Sunset seems to have a rather generous chest, so...
7363825 As stated in the story though, she has a rather modest chest. The cover is simply because it conveys the embarrassment feel well, and is eye catching.
As for the letters... not really. X and O were simple, as they're common yes and no, but then I decided to expand to four different options, and so needed two more letters.
I like how Sunset is acting, it shows she's changing and she's helping out poor button despite her not being queen of the school. I can't wait to see what you and Foals do next Jumbled.
You almost had me think I was making the decisions
Pretty much every choice of dialog I picked the right one
GO FLUTTERSHY!!
7363843 It caught my eye for sure.
I know, I'll show myself out now.
Hmm, looking good so far.
This is great! Keep it up!
This story is certainly going to be fun.
Eagerly looking forward to what happens.
i seem to have been one of the first to read a chapter of a story for once... wow, this feels... exactly the same
. All joking aside, good chapter. Can't wait to see what all Sunny gets into... or on to, as the case seems to be approaching 
.
So far so good
This entire fic needs to become at minimum a comic series. just saying
7488979 Ah, if only I could. T-T
7488979 Actually, to be fair, if I wanted to make these larger, I would make them CYOAs. Then, I would possibly make them visual novels, if I could somehow get all the art assets, as I know of a program that makes visual novel creation much easier for non-programmers. HOWEVER, due to how much some of these choices can change, and my limited time, the possibility is pretty much out of the question.
I simply do not have the time to do a full on CYOA for the Choices series. However, I am trying to work on a few things in that regard both here, for a commission, and on Clop Plots. Where do you think I found out about the program?
Sweetie Belle marches over, and she does not look happy. "STAY AWAY FROM MY MAN, YOU SLUT!!!"
X: Relent
O: Who does she think she is to talk to me like that? Put her in her place.
Y: Challenge her to a sing-off.
Damn lesbian crap.
7491465 And yet you put it in your favorites?
7489308 Dude, I think tons of us would love a CYOA for this series!!
7491690 And I love to do CYOAs! But, as I am being reminded of as I work on one that's commissioned, they take a LOT of time. As a short example, for something I'm doing with an art partner of mine, that story has four binary choices. Due to me not wanting only overlap (so your choices matter), the finished product is 5k words long, and this is while I was trying to limit myself on words.
So, while it would be fun, due to things like her possibly never meeting Button Mash, such a CYOA would be GARGANTUAN, and would need either a lot of support from my patrons, or a dedicated backer for me to work on it.
And I just thought about doing all the different combinations for the gym chapter. *I go off to cry*
7491748 There there pal, *awkwardly pats your back* It's alright.. maybe if you really want to do it work a little bit during your spare time, or wait for someone who feels strongly about this one to give you money! Or if you really don't want to do this then it's fine! Your work is still wonderful to read as always! Both this one AND the Sonata one!!
7491961 Hey, it's just what I do. And hey, if you ever want someone to pick this up, or give me more free time, you could always blog about my shtuff, leave likes, stuff like that.
Also, as for these one day becoming CYOAs... I really cannot say that that will ever happen, because the actual planning and such for a CYOA is very complex. Like, you know that you need to be sparing with things like quad choices, because that means that many more lines to go down. Just the first chapter alone, in theory, could probably end in five+ different places that it could then continue from.
7491998 Dang... yeah it would probably help if you sketched out a certain number of paths with only slight variation along the paths depending on choices! that way you could easily reuse a chapter with only having to change a few key words! If you need me to advertise for your stories btw just let me know id be happy to, not that many people would see it. I have very few followers.. oh, and I always leave likes on your stories! At least everyone of them that I have read!!
7492132 *hiss* I actually am against the concept of 'small variations', at least when they don't have their place. Or, that's how I feel now, so that it feels like your story can change. There is just a level where it is just out of control. ^^'
7492146 So am I makes the story a bit bland.. but hey if you need help I can lend you my aid! I could help you on this story should you so choose. I'm not a professional author (only a senior in highschool) but you're more than welcome to look at my stories to gauge my writing potential/skill to see if we could work together! But if it would help you it would be my pleasure!!
Sorry, because I think I won't manage to ask without making it sound odd, but is this one of those storys, where the sequels feel like they have nothing to do with the former story?
In which a sequel is more or less a different story, with a different girl or whatever? Like the same universe, but everything else is differnent? I don't exactly like that and would like to know if Sonata is the main char here too.
7492269 Unfortunately, the sequels are just to keep the concept altogether, rather than to make a cohesive world. Sonata is not a main character in this.
7492283 Well okay thank you.
V for victory!