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Okay, I'll admit to not seeing that coming. The supposed typo makes sense now.
Insert Darth Vader nooooooooooooooo
This is certainly interesting.
I am made of questions right now.
Huh, I remember making a comment to this type of situation elsewhere recently.
Be interesting to see where it goes. 
"The story of a father that will go to great lengths to spend time with her foal."
"father (..) with HER foal"
Shouldn't there be HIS?
7363569 Didn't you read the first chapter?
A great start, can't wait to read more. Though Shining and Chryssie spoke out of them near the end.
Well, she's an enemy of both kingdoms, attempted harm to a bunch of people, now rape...
I guess you can deal with this by slapping some chains on her and tossing her in one of Sombra's old dungeons.
Not sure what to think of this so far. On one hand I really like this author's work. On the other hand I've seen this scenario done poorly way too many times so now I'm pretty turned off by it.
I'll give this a try, certainly. Considering the tags, it's bound to be interesting.
This going to be good story...hehehe
There better be cool cover art for this soon! It looks like it will be such a good tale!
*que a slow version of "The Imperial March"*
Shining: "No... No! That's not true! That's impossible!"
Chryssy: "Search your feelings! You know it to be true!"
Shining: "NOOOOOO! Nooooo!" *sobs*
Yeah, yeah, Chrysalis. But really, you two?
Not only can you not be arsed to change your own kid's shitty pants, you hand it off to someone who has to use their mouth to do it? Damn, that's cold.
...wait what?
i dont understand
but it is unexpected thats for suree XD
My mind is a blank.....
What?
That's all I can think of.
No criticism, nothing to point out, just a plain old WTF!?
This is gonna be good!
Even if the concept of the story is bizarre and quite... unexpected, this thing has potential for greatness.
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I hope to see more of this story.
Well played, Chrysalis.
Well played.
(God, where.is the starlight emoji they need to put up!?)
I'm sorry, I may follow a good number of stories, but this one... I can't get past the implications to enjoy it. Other people might, but it's just not for me.
Will this ever be continued?