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Going to try this. Since I have no access to the like dislike ratio, I must read on.
EDIT: Dear god do I regret it. Any way, back to lurking on the front-page.
No. Just. Fucking no. This is honestly the most fucking disgusting imagery I've had in about a year. Besides that, this is chock-full of errors and is too fast paced.
7359791 Exactly. I honestly think I might be a hypocrite for agreeing with you, but it's honestly dull. We've heard this before. I think the problem is... It's too over-the-top. There's too much gore and death, not enough character development or pacing. What the hell happened for he/she to become what they are? How did they find this room?
So on and so on.
But nope, we get exactly what they put in the nutritional value label. Gore, cum, and rape. Oh, and don't forget the healthy dose of unexplained psychopath!
7359814 I don't have so much a problem with the grimdark as long as it's not overdone, like you said. For example, I think Cupcakes is just another creepypasta, something to make you shiver. Generally, the only thing that ever gets me in grimdark is eye torture or... Impalement in great detail. I have a particular phobia of being impaled in the gut, so that's something I'd rather avoid.
For what it's worth, tell me honestly in little detail, what can you gather from looking at the tags of this story alone. Forget everything you've learned here, and just think.
Well here's the first thing I gathered. Too many tags. You only need a few, granted I'm probably being a hypocrite again. I can also tell since this is clearly a grimdark fic and since there's also a romance tag there's either stockholm romance of some sort or it's just all rape and some kind of romance I don't know about. My first guess would be Lyra, but she's not in the main tags. There's also three of the Mane Six specified in the tags, meaning they have significance and are likely not to be immediately mutilated mindlessly. I also saw the Other tag. Which means that anyone can pop up.
Also, without even knowing who the first victim will be, I can predict it's Fluttershy. You come out of the forest and she's the first pony you get to murder. I know this since she was the very first murder victim in my story. And all the other stories. Nonetheless, there's also the bright green adventure tag, so this must mean they switch back and forth between POVs. There's also the 'witty' description, which doesn't tell us much. The title is a better description than what's actually there. I also gathered this is the author's first fic so I debated on whether or not to shank him.
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Even if some one was immune to being touched by magic, I doubt they'd be immune to throwing...say...a carriage or large would, hell even a tree at them at high velocity.
Hell just drop a house on them would sold issues.
Its why a lot of stories of crazy people attacking ponies and going on sprees don't work logically as unless they are smart and stealthy about it then you can easily stop a human. We are very fragile after all.
This many tags is never a good sign.
Also what the fuck kind of character name is Jack the Maniac anyways? Who are you, bizzarro Dr Seuss?
...What the fuck
Well, at least you're happy with this piece of shit. Cheers, m8. I'm gonna read this through to see how fucked in the head you are. ._.
I am going to read it and it better be so bad it is good.
This is so fucking horrible that it is great. You sir, may just be the newest voice of Fimfiction and a real hero.
7360118 That's why I want to force-fuck a crossover with Poppy Opossum into working.
Ponies would be dismayed at meeting a 2'11" 545lb possum-shaped hole in the local mana field.
7360118 still a sword or spear held by a normal earth pony then would stop them. Jell crossbows. Out simply wait for turn to walk under some heavy objects suspended by a rope then cut the rope and let gravity do its thing.
But yeah these mass murder killing sprees don't work. The killer has to operate like a serial killer. Looko g totally innocent and then when the time is right you strike. Then leave no trace.
Ponies have no idea what is happening as you look like a rose.
But yeah storied like this have very little logic or reason to them and are just existing for some ones fantasy.
This smells like Displaced with an OC.
Also, very disturbing read. Do you have some sort of mental disorder?
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Must you be so boring? I swear, it`s like you people think madness is something definite.
Yeah, no, have yourself a well-deserved downvote for sticking with bottom-feeder cliches.
There's a point where making controversial content is a good thing, and a bad thing. This is certainly bad. It offers nothing to me as a viewer. It is quite simply just a bad read. A lazy effort. Just...bad. Bad, bad. I came here because I wrote something somewhat controversial before and mine was added to the "Why?" folder/area, where stories get MASSIVE amounts of unnecessary hate. I was under the impression this received similar treatment.
It didn't. This is nasty.
I couldn't even get all the way through the first chapter without wondering how in the hell this got past moderation. I swear, the mods will allow ALMOST ANYTHING these days. I do a massive re-write of a story and it gets rejected yet raw and mindless filth like this gets approved. I have some advice, nix this horrid work entirely. I have read a lot of bad stories but this one is by far the worst, even worse than that one involving the Nazi going into Russia and then winding up in Equestria.
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No.
Beautiful. :')
However foul the story is, that cover art gets me every time.
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Hey, thanks for the support, mate.
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I liked that nazi story.
7396485 There is one specific reason I didn't like that one. The author had the Chinese fighting alongside the Russians. If they are going to try to tie history into a story, at least get it right. In another one of that author's works he had Russian soldiers in Vietnam and believed that wolves existed in that country, both of which are wrong.
Nigga why?
Edit after reading all of it: NIGGA WHY!!??
Well, it was quite interesting but still not the most fucked up story I read on this site, I give you a C+ for the effort. lol
this disgusting!
well done.
This is funnier than 99% of the so-called "comedy" fics on this site. Have a fave and a downvote.
Oh shit! That like to dislike ratio...
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I know, right?!