• Member Since 21st Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Jun 8th, 2023

Divem


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So. I'm still in the forest after waking up. I had hoped that I was just doing the pain test wrong, but the chances of this being some kind of lucid dream is seeming less and less likely. Not that it was ever a likely chance, but denial has always been a very human response to the unexpected.

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I would love advice or opinions on how I could do better.

782923 Keep writing. That is all.

FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!111!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!! I WINS ALOF TEH MUFFINS

Seems alright so far, for a straight up journal.
No major issues, but it could get stale pretty quickly.

Isn't that a serpent, rather than a dragon?

I like how this new update listed other stories I might be interested in at the bottom of the chapter I read on a new story. Unfortunately, having it show me a story that is incomplete and has not been updated In 2 years and 5 months, sucks. :twilightoops:

knightly needs to put some better filters on this new update. :twilightangry2:


Sorry that this comment has nothing at all to do with your story as I did not read it. This is just a complaint about how I got here is all.

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