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Rtrotten


I love to write...I'm just not amazing at doing it yet. Poetry will be posted if anyone wants to hear it.

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This story is a sequel to Radiarc - Ex Machina


Spoiler alert for the last book.Warning! Warning! After the death of Rarity, Spike is heartbroken and boiling with rage. Spike meets an old friend and promises something to them. After Rarity's funeral Spike decides to go talk with Trenderhoof.

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The short preview description could use some editing/proofreading.

Why did you do what you do, why did you kill her. After her death a friend of her's goes on a mission to find out what lead to her death.

Why did you do what you did; why did you kill her? After her death, her friend (or "a friend of hers," but that's more verbose) goes on a mission to find out what led to her death.

7363555 Thank you... again! Do you proof read for books as well?

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:twilightsmile: You're welcome, friend. Truly, it's the least I could do.

I've never proofread for a commercially available book, no, but I do some editing on here sometimes. Mostly, it's just for friends on here who've approached me and asked for me to help out. Even during the summer, I have so little time to commit to other things that I don't join up with the editing groups on here and advertise myself as an editor because doing so will land me jobs, and at this point, I don't feel up to committing to projects without payment unless I would feel remiss for not embarking upon them. :twilightsheepish: I figure I shouldn't advertise if I'm not highly willing and able to provide to everyone, you know?

7363828 That is very understandable.

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But in the case of short descriptions on here, I would feel rather guilty if I didn't speak up. So many people will simply overlook a story if the first thing they see is less than immaculate. It's unfair, but that's how it goes, so I like to do what I can to give people like you a fair chance, at least, at making a decent first impression.

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