Hey guys! I write sadfics and sadfic accessories! Oh, and I also do comedy things. Yeah. Feel free to check out my stuff! And I hope you enjoy whichever story of mine you happen to be on! ^^
During the Winter Wrap Up, Twilight tells Spike that Ponyville was formed by earth ponies, and for hundreds of years nopony used magic for the Winter Wrap Up. But Granny Smith had been part of the founding of Ponyville when she was just a filly. When the Cutie Mark Crusaders get wind of this strange occurence, even stranger revalations come to light.
Page generated in 0.123 seconds
Total duration
1,019 users online
2,136,163 hits today, 2,561,572 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Ok, i can see where this is going... and i like it!
Epilogue?
803880 nnnope
803748 deleted comment due to spoiler.
8039 Yeah what were Lyra and the human thinking?
Not bad for your first comedy fic. Well done!
803927 Thanks
Hmmm... it's a nice story, and I think you got most of the personalities spot on, and it does cover a rather nagging point of the timeline between various statements in the episodes with an interesting option for the reason. I'm not sure that it's comedy, per se, though. Still, it was a great read, and hopefully you'll find another scene or two to add to this at some time.
SPOILERS
So it was Iron Will? Didn't see that one coming...
Oh snap! Things just got freaky
This is really good. It feels like 5 star quality as well! There are a few spelling errors in one part of the story but apart from that, it looked flawless.
Well done! Like and Fav
New headcanon.
808391 Deleted comment due to spoilers. And yes, I meant for it to be like that.
Wha? Well this is certainly intersting...
812223 Ermmm, is that a GOOD derp or a BAD derp?
It's the kind that happened when my mind tried to decide whether it liked the solution you presented or any of the others more, thereby preventing me from mentioning that this is well written and I like it. Then again, it was also in expression of that like.
So maybe it was just a derp? But it was on my part, not yours.
812369
812382
...well, okay, -that- derp is yours. I had mine.
I think.
812415
That was nice, but I have my own theory on Granny Smithy's age and while it might seem ridiculous keep in mid that this series has quarry eels, bears made up of stars and a god of chaos that looks like the result of an animal kingdom orgy. i always thought Granny Smith was an immortal highlander and only fifty years ago did she cut off her rival's head and claim the prize(all the wisdom in Equestria, the ability to grow old and have children); it's not really far fetched compared to the rest of the show.
CH, are you gonna be writing more for this? otherwise how can there be spoilers?
818753
Because some people, like me, have a tendency to read comments before we read the story.
Good story. I think the characterisation of Twilight and Rarity was a too little meme-tastic (having Twilight break out actual comments from Lesson Zero was actually painful), but overall the characterisation was good, the story flows well, and the final surprise was a surprise at least to me, while at the same time making some sense within the ponyverse.
Thanks for sharing this story!
820815 But.... I liked the Lesson Zero Twi......
820844
Me too - it is one of my favorite episodes. That's not the problem. The problem is when fans take quotes from a single episode that have become memes and treat them as character catchphrases, so instead of having your character talking like the character from the show, you have your character spout quotes from the character in the show. That's unimaginative and disturbing; it brings me out of your story and just brings up my memories of the episode or even worse, umpteen various bothersome gifs and manips and whatnot from the interwebs based on the quote. It does not help with showing Twilight's personality. Since the rest of your story is so very well written, it irks me that you do this and make your writing worse!
If you make a sequel to this It'll be interesting to see how Old Filthy Rich is since his father was around in Granny Smith's youth.
Also didn't see the ending coming, I thought it would have been some secret property of Zap apples that the Apple and Rich families have been keeping to themselves.
Apple Bloom is two words, but beyond that, this is a really nice fic.
Dude... you're going to tell that other story now, right? RIGHT? Please?
You know, put it in the future when Apple Bloom is ready for this story? Please? I wanna know now! 
1275048 OH man, this was done so so long ago..... You should check out my OTHER comedy fic that I have done. "Fluttershy Learns the Royal Canterlot Speaking Voice" Also, I've thought of doing a followup for this... but I like how it ended here.
1275060 awwwww... well, I expected that. This is a good ending and I'd be okay with ending it, but the fact that she mentioned another "story" implies that there actually is a detailed reason that may make a good "story". I would be curious, but not nearly as curious as I am now, had Granny not mentioned that another story was involved. Well, do what you have time for.
Are both the mirror and the horn cracked, or are there only cracks in the reflection of the horn because of the cracks in the mirror? Probably cracks in both.
2069209
yeah that confused me too, There are still a few errors, an m instead of an n here or there. etc... Some of the dialogue was flat in this one, Twilight seemed a bit forced, too. But it's a short fic and the punchline was fun, and the cmc were written pretty much perfectly.
Sweetie
BotBelle for best pony!Alicorn Grannysmith??????????????
was my initial reaction. "What a cop out" I thought.
Then I kept reading....wings
....horn 
Alicorn Granny Smith!
media0.giphy.com/media/eEtxYul1kBS80/giphy.gif
Granny Smith is an Alicorn???
Will there be an explanation of her becoming an Alicorn and why her horn is damaged?
This needs a continuation!