It isn't easy learning the Art of Friendship and Basic Social Skills,
and sometimes a pony feels the need to vent from such rigorous studies!
Princess Twilight Sparkle listens attentively as Starlight Glimmer voices her frustrations,
hoping she can be as wise as Princess Celestia in guiding her student when she needs it most.
But perhaps Starlight wishes Twilight wasn't always so good at understanding her!
An intriguing look at the relationship between student and teacher. Nice work.
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Thank you!
Well hey. I enjoyed this. There were moments when it felt a little impersonal- but a good read. I hope you have a nice day.
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Thank you. Could you elaborate on what you meant about it feeling 'impersonal' please? I'm curious, and always open to constructive critcism!
*edit* oh, do you mean like using too many passive verbs?
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YYYES BINGO
Thank you. I couldn't place my finger on it. But Yes! That is what I meant. GL!
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Yeah, thank you for mentioning it though.
It's a bad habit of mine to use too much passive verbs!
Maybe I can fix that on this story at least!