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I'm confused what does the image have to do with the story?
This is interesting. I want more, though, and I don't mean that in a good way, necessarily.
I want more sexy details during the hot and heavy bits, because it wasn't enough for me. But I also want more emotional details because I found this all quite interesting. Especially the bit where Twilight says she's the same person she's always been, even when she's under the effects of her urges. I wonder what that's like. It must be very distracting, having thoughts in your head that you know you're going to regret, or aren't going to matter the next day, but there they are... whispering in your ear, drowning everything else out, making you wonder what in the world you're going to do to fix the mistakes you're making at this very moment.
And our male protagonist is basically going through the same struggle, too! How interesting.
I don't quite get the bit at the end, though. How exactly are things turning out? Is Twilight not going to acknowledge her lurid acts? Is our protagonist going to get sent to the sun? How do things unfold from here? I want more ^_^
Subucus? Sex demon reference?
7353018 Sorry to have confused you. I didn't want to leave the picture spot blank because I felt a picture would make the story easier on the eyes. I couldn't find a picture of regular Twilight that I liked, much to my disappointment, So, I opted to use SciTwi instead. The story has nothing to do with SciTwi, though.
7353255 I get where you're coming from, and I blame my own inexperience. You see, when it gets right down to it, I could never replicate the emotions or details of lewd acts because I've never participated in such lewd acts. I try my best, though, but thanks for pointing it out. I'll try... asking? Does asking people what sex feels like count as weird? I shall see.
Also, not gonna lie, the thing that hooked you on this story (I mean the parts about fighting urges) was completely accidental. I didn't know I was writing anything of importance. Just rambling on.
7353502 Eh, not quite. She's not a succubus since she's not a demon. She's not taken over by anything demonic either. Basically, I can't explain it better than: "She's really pent up and frustrated." I do notice now that she acts like a succubus.
The part where she almost caught him in the bathroom had one title pop into my head: One Night At Twilight's.
I can imagine a Five Nights at Freddy's parody where a guy has to hide from the main six while they're all in heat at the same time.
7353849 That'd be pretty great.
7353629 the story looks interesting but I'm a girl and ik its second person but idk if you made it to where everyone can read it or not. I have a question though . Could u make a girl anon kiss Twilight and sunset shimmer? If you can't that's fine But it would be really interesting t read a story lke that
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Meh, just guess. I'm sure someone will tell you if it seems unrealistic. Plus you have license to make stuff up. Twilight was casting sex magic and the details of that weren't described at all. I didn't see any incantations, no descriptions of what it felt like, etc. That would have been cool to see, and there's no getting it wrong if it's magic.
7354328 I'm not sure I understand what you're saying. Firstly, this isn't second person, just first person. Sorry to have confused you. Secondly, is there something wrong with the story to the extent where you cannot read it? Is it an issue with the story itself or the site? Thirdly, I might make that story, but I can't garuntee it'll be good.
7354365 So many things to amend in the next chapter. Thanks again for bringing it to my attention.
7354372 oh no! The story is not bad it's pretty good. It just sounded like it was anon' point of view for a minute and I was just wondering since there hasn't been a lot of girl anon stories with Twilight or sunset shimmer for the matter I've been trying to make a series out of it but I'm not to great on detailing and such
Why is this in the human x pony group if there is no human tag?
7364607 I made a mistake, then fixed it to be anthropomorphic. Soz.