It's safe to say I won't be going to sleep after that picture...

...Or this story.

Interesting, to say the least. Now I remembered why I don't read the 'Recently uploaded' fics.
Also, the fact that it's still a 2:1 disapproval rating is quite interesting, given the fact that most clop is shot down without any justification.

This... this is way too kinky for me.

I'm with BandBrony. This is a little . . . much.

Yea... this is like an evil genie version of a fic I wanted. I wanted Screwloose and some stallion. But this is just... filth. And not in a good way.

OH SWEET MOTHER CELESTIA.
...ahem. There were a few punctuation errors, suggesting that this needed a little more proofreading, and some of the dialogue felt pornographically forced. But on the whole the story was well-realized, with a good blend of eroticism and realism and a good spin on an old concept. That said, unless your target audience is an extremely specific one, I'm not entirely sure who this story is for. At the end, am I meant to be delighted at the sexual exploits of our heroine and these two gentlecolts, or should I be horrified at the brutal patient abuse and terrible living conditions of this hospital? It doesn't lean quite far enough in either direction, so I find myself walking away from this feeling simply ambivalent.
Also, GAAAAAH OF ALL THE WORST POSSIBLE THINGS AAAUUUGH.

I...just...I...uh...No...

Don't get me wrong it's good! Just... a bit... much...

This was beautiful so amazing plz more you are. My number one guy to go to when I need to clop thank you for writing this

THE DALEK BATTLE FLEET WILL DELIVER MAXIMUM EXTERMINATION TO THESE 3

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"the gray stallion screamed as he shot his seed deep within the insane mare's bowels."
Yet another line I wrote that will keep me up at night.

wtf man, gang rape of a mental patient in a bit much fuck O_o

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fictional character...dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png

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... again...

Go with it.

This manages to be and at the same time.

Well...a-uh...w-well then...

: WOW.

...Yeah, she took the word right out of my mouth.

Well written and an interesting concept. It's certainly original and is very different from many clop fics. While there are a few errors here and there, it's well done.

Although it does go a tad too far at some points, it's still decent. There are a few parts that seem unnecessarily crude and could be toned down a bit, but that's just my opinion.

Four mustaches

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Actually, the criteria for rape is not that the victim is unwilling, but that they have not granted the other party consent. As Screw Loose has been institutionalized, she would be legally considered incapable of granting consent, in the same way that teens and children are, or animals. This is most definitely rape.
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3/5

Welp, fuck everything.

I got a boner.

Welp, this is gonna hurt to riff.

NO SHAME, NO REGRET!

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Nice start, more than anything I'd like to see how a story can proceed from an insane character.

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I'm on the ground laughing while I read that line.

Well.......that happens.

......And IT WAS HAWT!!!!!

"Ow!" Shocker cried out, his eyes watering in pain, "Son of a bitch!"

how appropriate, given who they're screwing.

Reading this, I feel like I should be ashamed, And I do feel it, a little. Ironically enough, I feel no guilt reading foalcon fics (unless they're abusive. Then I get angry that I can't punch the abuser in the face.). Someone care to explain this to me?