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Thanks for Coming In! | Retired

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The plane carrying the Element Bearer's has gone missing from the sky, its only trace of existence the drake that fell from it. Spike, being accused of a mess he did not create, must use a machine called F.L.U.D.D to clean an island and search for his lost friends.

Woohoo!


Crossover with Super Mario Sunshine: The best Mario game of all time (fight me.)

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First off, agreed. Secondly, it's not "Flood," it's F.LU.D.D, the acronym for Flash Liquidizer Ultra Dousing Device. Third, MOAR!!! Fourth, WHY IN THE SAM SHELL (as I'm pretty sure a Koopa or some other resident in the Mushroom Kingdom say) HASN'T NINTENDO MADE A SEQUEL FOR THE 3DS YET?! THEY DID IT WITH LUIGI'S MANSION (another great game, as is Dark Moon judging by the YouTube videos I've seen of it) SO WHY CAN'T THEY DO IT FOR SUNSHINE?! And fifth, WHEN AND IF NINTENDO MAKES SUNSHINE 2, LUIGI MUST BE IN IT IN SOME WAY. HE COULD'VE BEEN A BIG HELP TO MARIO, ESPECIALLY IN THE COURT ROOM WHEN MARIO WAS FRAMED FOR BOWSER JUNIOR/SHADOW MARIO'S WRONGDOINGS. THEN MARIO AND LUIGI COULD'VE HELPED THE ISLANDERS ANYWAY BECAUSE THEY'RE GOOD MEN. ALSO, I CALL SHENANIGANS ON THAT TRIAL IN THE FIRST PLACE.

*gasp, gasp* Okay, I'm done. good job thus far.

I have two minor complaints:
1. Rainbow complaining about ringing in her ears feels weird, given all the stunt flying she does. Even if pegasi aren't naturally equipped to deal with such things, you'd think Rainbow would be used to it by now.
2. The description of "old man" feels weird given the setting. Or are we meant to envision an elderly pony. Not clear.

Other than that, color me intrigued. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. :twilightsmile:

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Apologies. Wrote this while drunk in a shower and haven't had the time to edit it yet.

Fucking Nintedo does need to make a sequel to Sunshine, as its the best Mario game out there. Luigi Mansion makes me feel a bother inside (in a good way), but I would like a truer sequel to the theme that the original gives out.

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you'd think Rainbow would be used to it by now.

... Sheeit. Drunk me never even considered that. Thanks for pointing that out – I'll BS my way around it.

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description of "old man" feels weird

Fuck mate, did I really say man? I'll fix that right away; no peoples are allowed in my stories.

Sick MS Paint skills you have there m8.

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