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RuinQueenofOblivion


Dashite forever!

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Rainbow Dash is a young mare living in Manehattan, she's got a decent life, a job, a coltfriend who's nice enough. But one day she receives a piece of news that changes her life forever.

How will she cope? And what will happen to her now?


This story is a prequel to Please Forgive Me.

Credit for the cover image goes to ADeviantmember-yea

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 29 )

Can you please state the artist's name and provide a link to their artwork if at all possible? You can't give credit to the artist if no one knows who they are.

7345465 Did you try looking? I looked on Derpibooru and didn't find anything, but it is definitely something you should do. If not, you might add to the description that you don't know the identity of the artist. It matters.

7345594 Phoenix Nebula might know, I got it in a thread from him.

7345602

You called?


Also nice prequel short and to the point.

7373702 Thanks, like I said in the note it was originally chapter 1 of Please Forgive Me

And yeah, I wanted to know if you knew who made the image.

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I'll check and see if I can find it.

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Here is the page I found it: A Friend

7373748 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, wasn't really necessary to write a prequel, but I had written most of this before I decided to have Please Forgive Me's first chapter end with the reveal to build dramatic tension, so I figured, why not make it into a prequel instead of it just sitting on my computer?

7373764 Besides, I'm enjoying this universe and would love to write more in it.

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It was just an idea that I came up with you don't need my input just do with it as you please.

7373775 Of course, it was an interesting idea, I'm glad I gave it a try.

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I'm glad you like I cant tell you how many of my story ideas don't get noticed or are disliked. It's hard shearing your ideas because anyone can use them and change them to the point were it hardly resembles the original idea. There is nothing I can do about it, so it's good to see some one use my idea and keep the original idea mostly in tact.

7373841 Well, it doesn't hurt that I was considering writing this story anyway, its an interesting alternate look at their relationship and is somewhat plausible in a weird way.

There is a sequel too now called Deepest Desires.

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I'll look into it. I'm a bit busy right now.

I think this song goes with Scootaloo if you really think about it.

Steven Stern- Soul of a Man

7631333 You can't escape the feels in this universe.

7631857 Which is why I love writing in this universe.

7631906 Yeah, the feels tend to hit me often and hard, especially when it comes to Scootaloo. This universe is meant to do the same.

7631933 Well I'' glad you're liking it.

7631951 Yeah, but I still love reading them, she's awesome.

7631968 which is why she's my favorite character to write about outside of Fallout: Equestria.

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:raritycry:
This pretty much sums up how I feel after reading this.:applecry:

who gave the ninjas onions

That was so good.

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