• Member Since 9th Jan, 2012
  • offline last seen Nov 16th, 2016

JDMHouse


It seems I'm not capable of writing a bio without sounding really pretentious, so I'll keep it simple.I write pony-fanfiction. That is all.

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"You have the same eyes, the same smile, even the same laugh. You two would be so much alike. If only..."

No one is a stranger to secrets. Some of us become quite intimate with them, spend years watching over them, even build our whole lives around them. Big Mac is no stranger to the agony of maintaining a years-long facade, and Apple Bloom is not unfamiliar with his silence. But there comes a time when curiosity grows too great, and the pain too deep. Just one question...

Cover art by the stupendous, incomparable and otherwise splendiferous Arby Works.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 12 )

Good stuff. Saw the outcome a third of the way in, but it was still good stuff. Hope to see more of it some day.

Amazing concept and story. Should comea sequel of their live after this! I DEMAND! but no is okay too.

The poem seems familiar - is it something you quoted for the story?

Wow. Enjoyable and heartbreaking at the same time.
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AAAAAAAAAAAND TWO YEARS LATER, hello Autumn~

:fluttercry: i called that when it said autumn B. but that was still one of the best things i have ever read. “You have the same eyes" all i could think of is, "you have your mothers eyes"

Why would Mac hide his being her father in the first place? Maybe the idea originally was to have his own parents pretend to be hers so she wouldn't be sad about her, and it all just went horribly wrong with them dying? Still weird though.

Nothing but tears and sadness but happiness at the same time

Well I've got to say, this is one of the best sad stories I've seen on here. This was very well put together, and has a great plot. Good job, you do us proud.

I loved it! Very moving story. really great:heart:

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