"You have the same eyes, the same smile, even the same laugh. You two would be so much alike. If only..."
No one is a stranger to secrets. Some of us become quite intimate with them, spend years watching over them, even build our whole lives around them. Big Mac is no stranger to the agony of maintaining a years-long facade, and Apple Bloom is not unfamiliar with his silence. But there comes a time when curiosity grows too great, and the pain too deep. Just one question...
Cover art by the stupendous, incomparable and otherwise splendiferous Arby Works.
Chapters (1)
Good stuff. Saw the outcome a third of the way in, but it was still good stuff. Hope to see more of it some day.
Amazing concept and story. Should comea sequel of their live after this! I DEMAND! but no is okay too.
wow
The poem seems familiar - is it something you quoted for the story?
Wow. Enjoyable and heartbreaking at the same time.
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AAAAAAAAAAAND TWO YEARS LATER, hello Autumn~
Why would Mac hide his being her father in the first place? Maybe the idea originally was to have his own parents pretend to be hers so she wouldn't be sad about her, and it all just went horribly wrong with them dying? Still weird though.
Nothing but tears and sadness but happiness at the same time
Well I've got to say, this is one of the best sad stories I've seen on here. This was very well put together, and has a great plot. Good job, you do us proud.
I loved it! Very moving story. really great