Once again, any available and all help is appreciated. I doubt i will get close to the amount of likes to the original story but i would love to know if this is what the bronies want!

Shows promise! Needs some editing work but not bad.

One thing did stand out though. "continued her menstruation on her body."

Should be ministrations rather than menstruation. Menstruation is a girl's period, just fyi.

7330434 it was a very nice backstory very informativ i like it

So by accepting the offer Spike would save her life.

7331798 And he would unknowingly do so.

7332578 I heard of Marriage at Gunpoint but Mating at Death's Door?

I'm not sure why she is lying to Spike. I'm pretty Spike would have left any way to save her life. But then again, she doesn't know him very well.

7332896 Death is most beautiful when the ones you love near her step. She compels you to make your vows, she urges you to remove your sins, she gets joy, knowing that behind her door, you may truely never experience love again when you pass, or that your souls, would be bound into timeless memorial.

7333749 Hence the confusion in the second chapter. I left it so because even I didn't know how to write it. This chapter somewhat explains it also giving you a Prequel to the story.

I like it. Sex and feels with a deeper insight to the power of a Dragon Lord.
Now we wait for the emotional dam to break later.

Wait... they can't be separated for more than a week?
She'll DIE of loneliness
Sorry, had to poke fun, but not a bad start.

Why is this under spikes harems ? If its only ember as I understand

7367544 I think it will get more complicated later on... Im not even sure.

I see grammar improvements! I like it. Also, nice touch with the side story character development.

So are you done here or are you gona keep going.

will this continue?

Nice-o!! I like it. It's a shame it only has 2 chapters.

I feel like part of this should have been in the other version to make it feel a bit more natural (in this version you actually get to know her thoughts before she went to spike

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