• Member Since 25th Jul, 2015
  • offline last seen Sep 18th, 2018

Jade Crossroads


There is no such thing as coincidence and reality is what you make of it. Nothing more, nothing less.

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This is a short little oneshot I did as a collab with Mister Phoenix, who actually came up with the idea for it in the first place, but he wanted me to post it here.

The story starts with Trixie in a rainstorm, unable to find shelter.
When Twilight gets involved can the two get past their differences?

(told ya it was short!)

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 7 )

Some grammars throughout the whole thing, but it was a fine read.
Though you should change the status to "Complete".

7334584 I'll go ahead and fix those, thank you.
I don't usually write one shots, so I guess I forgot. :twilightsheepish:

7334593 You're welcome.

Nice little story. I loved the way you wrote Trixie's character, it seemed very realistic. Although you could've included some internal conflict, like how Trixie specifically felt about Twilight and how it affected her. Have a like! :twilightsmile:

7363213 I was going to add more to the beginning, but I thought better of it. Thank you.:twilightsmile:

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