So what would happen if Lelouch and Nunnally were to be taken into the world of My Little Pony? Would Lelouch give up his dreams of conquering Britannia and live peacefully in the world of Equestria? Or perhaps will he choose to return to Britannia and continue the carnage that he started? What would he do to assure his sister's safety in this new and unfamiliar world? This fan-fic is purposed to be my own depiction of what could happen if this calamity of a cross-over were to actually come true.
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will read
ok read.
a few things
1) every time the speaker changes, its a new paragraph, doing that would make it a bit easier to read
2) at the end of the chapter, i think you forgot that Nunnally has a bleeding head wound that should be attended to
3) some parts seam to be a bit awkwardly worded, you might wanna try reading it out loud,
4) not really a big deal, but you might wanna use italics or something to indicate thought
anyways, great concept. will track.
If you took this idea and wrote it with Code Guess (the abridged version of this on youtube) instead I would definitely give it a shot. Unfortunately for you, I have never watched the real show because I watched a "Top Ten Anime Deaths" video on YT and accidently spoiled it for myself. Now, I am just watching the abridged because purpleeyeswtf will probably make everything ten times better than the original anyway.
Yes! Someone didn't do a one shot for once or simply replaced the characters of the fandom. You my friend, are a bloody genius! Insta-Everything!!!
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The actual show was really good, but you are 100% correct in that purpleeyes made everything so much more awesome.
I apologize everypony, I will be slightly rewriting the first chapter soon because I must admit, it needs quite a bit of adjusting so that people can understand it better. Also think the settings deserve better description, but overall what happens in the first chapter won't change.
However, I haven't been feeling well lately, so I won't be too active on this fan-fic until I start feeling better.
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The whole new world table love scene sort of mentally scarred me for life though.
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Yeah, yeah it'll do that. The worst part is that if you take away the song, the scene did kinda turn out that way in the actual show.
I WANT MOAR..... please.
789644plz continue the story
781903>>782901 no.
Code Geass is one of the best animés ever, abridging cannot top it.
Am I saying this as a fan____? No, I have seen some pretty good and pretty bad animés, but this one takes the truthless cake.
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Have you watched the Code MENT series? You at least have to admit that it is funny by itself, even if you don't think it's as funny as the original. I agree with the anime part, I've seen good and bad. I used to really love the Naruto and Naruto Shippuden, but after the Pein arc it pretty much became the Sasuke show. Same with DBZ. It was good until they started the GT series.
Well...........I don't suppose this is being continued then?
i donno Lelouch wanted Nunnally to be safe and happy, so i think everything is going to be ok