Princess Celestia and Princess Luna wiped the Rainbow Factory from existence after suspicion that they've killed the Princess of Friendship, Twilight Sparkle. The shadow of a once-deadly device still falls over Equestria...
...but what will the princesses do when the legend of the device was all a lie, the truth being worse than they could've imagined?
The jingle was a mask that covered the truth,
Lies being spread throughout the land.
For the color of rainbows loved by the youth,
The souls of ponies did the device demand...
(Soon-To-Be collab with one mister/miss Preduns.)
(The complete Prologue is now released!)
Chapters (2)
(Message taken off because of its complete loss of relevancy.)
7334995 Awesome. Nice one mate.
7336048
Thanks!
It's just the prologue, though, and there's going to be a prologue extension.
This looks like the beginning of something good.
Side note: I seem to read your stories in The voice of Fluttershy
7341175
Thanks!
I hope I won't disappoint you or the others reading this.
Full Prologue is released! Enjoy reading, its got some surprises.
This is some overdone bull-!
*reads the prologue*
Oh... this is actually good. Nevermind me -- carry on!
~ Chapter: 13
7342209
Uh, thanks?
I'm going to start the first chapter probably somewhat soon out of boredom. This won't hinder my abilities, though, so be prepared!
7342219 I await! I'm impressed so far, and I expect this to continued; making an overused concepts enjoyable isn't an easy feat, which shows tallent.
~ Chapter: 13
7342456
Thanks! I've never been a normal writer anyways.
I took the concept of the Rainbow Factory and gave it some unique ideas for the most part.
(Normally, I tend to overdo the Prologue and then the actual Chapters just breeze right by.)
Oooo
This seems like an interesting story
Looking forward to moreeee
I'm really looking forward to this!
Oh, my goodness.
EVEN BETTER! I'm intrigued, good sir/ma'am. Please continue, for I, Angry Lass, shall await for more!
HYYYYPPEEEEE!!!!! GET READY B!TCHAZZ CU ZI THINK THIS IS GOING TO BE A GOOD STORY!!!!!
okay.. im just seeing forward to this story. XD
If you need cover art, just tell me! im an artist. im currently working on a dark artwork about the rainbow factory.
ite not finished yet.. but you can see the progress in this video:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=aGiNjy_L8d8
sooo... if you need an artist, im here for you!
7346452
That'd be awesome! Hope you like what I put out in the near future!
Chapter 1 is now released. I may add some more stuff onto it later to lengthen it out.
It's not as hype as the Prologue, I know… but it's better than nothing.
Love the writing style. Though, twilight's dark magic does almost jump the shark. Almost.
~ Chapter: 13
7351299
Twilight using this magic was, of course, for the benefit of Equestria (she could find a way to return Sombra to the state he was in before being evil, she could put a seal on Tartarus for good, etc etc…) because hey, it's Twilight. I felt that it could come into play later on, but I won't say much more about it...
7351942 I did say close.
~ Chapter: 13
7350228
huh, finally gave this a read. Was not disappointed.
7352611
I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Wow I can't wait to see how this goes...
i really like this story! keep on writing! your very good!
i currently dont have any story ideas....
but is this really only your first story? its soo well written!
btw, i commented earlyer... (im the artist guy..) and i can send you my artwork when its done so you have some nice coverart for this story. ill add the title of the story to the pic if you want!
7355298
I'd love it if you could! (By the way, second, in a way; I'm writing another at the same time... sort of.)
7354441
Weren't you gonna be helping me with the story?
7356522 wow prudens = retard confirmed
XD. But I was in my thinking tree recently as well...
Once again, emoshy never fails to deliver good stories.
7361958
You sly dog. You found my other story.
Thanks for the compliment, though!
This seems like an interesting fic, but I don't think I should add it to my read later list since it hasn't been updated in a while.