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OK. That description sounds epic. I am go ng you a like for that and I haven't even read the story yet.

Congrats onwriting a great description

okay, this is interesting. Bombs away!

How dark will this story be?

7323363 Depends on your knowledge of the air war in WW2 Europe. It was pretty brutal. It won't be like Saving Private Ryan infantry man with his guts out kind of dark. Really when I put dark up there I really meant the horrors of war. None of the characters are gonna go psycho rainbow factory of cupcakes crazy. I'll probably remove it and just leave the mature tag to suffice for the war scenes. Hope you still enjoy it though.

Wow. I can't wait for the next chapter.

this sounds like its going to be a very interesting story! so have a like and follow. the only thing i wish was the lancaster would have been a halifax, my favorite british bomber.well done to you so far!

A Lancaster. Very beautiful aircraft and a nice choice, in my opinion. Most of my favorite aircraft from WW2 were American, but the Lancaster is one of four British aircraft I like. If you add a Spitfire (I'm talking about the plane), Mosquito, or Beaufighter later on, than you would really made this exciting. But it's your story, your choice.

You have my interest. Now keep it.

Found a couple of mistakes:

She a tough mare, not one to suffer fools.
*Is a

strange green cloud suddenly form directly in their path.
*Formed

It had a class nose and a long black body
I think you mean glass.

Im liking this story a lot.

For some reason this song comes into mind:

What year is this set in?

So are we looking at Lancasters or Halifax?

I dont care whether or not this story turns out good or bad. I love the concept and first chapter of it already. The aviation warfare of WW2 has captured my interest for a long time so it will be nice to see someone write about it.

If you want help in any way, dont he afraid to ask. Id love to hear the process of making this too.

Can you do more please

RIP another good story

7955572 Just hold on. I have college to contend with. I also want to make sure that all of my research is accurate so that the story is told correctly. The next chapter is in the works I just have to find time to work on it.

7955912 I think youve had enough time (im not trying to be rude) the last chapter was last June

7956004 I understand. All I can do is apologize for being late and try to update as soon as I can. I do appreciate that you like the story

Hey, it says this fanfic was updated but I don't see a new chapter.

Is there a reason this in on the recently updated?

8490137
Sorry. I wanted to write that I was putting this on hiatus but the update chapter was taking down.

Why is this on hiatus after only one chapter?

8490363
Busy schedules have prevented me from writing new material. I also have been having writers block with this story and needed to step back and allow for new inspiration.

Can you do more please

This could be an excellent story, it's an awesome start at least. I haven't really seen any real stories with these four pony characters together, so I'm even more eager than I am normally for an interesting story like this one.

(No, I have not keyed in each of the characters names into the search engine, to get a story that will include them all. But after reading this I probably will now.)

9904474
No I think it's dead. Sorry.

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