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This story is a sequel to Sweet Pea


The royal family's story wasn't the only one with a happy ending. A spin-off story to my MLP fairy-tales starring Rumble's brother Thunderlane. Set during and before the events of Sweet Pea.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

This is shaping up good...:moustache:
I wonder how they met Maud...:duck:

So, that's how he ended up in jail. Gee, I wonder how they met Maud. Are we also going to see Limestone and Marble make an appearance?

Wow!:pinkiehappy: You have exceeded my expectations.
So, do they ever find Matilda?

Matilda chapter, now.

And this is why I don't like Zephyr.:ajbemused:

7341371 Hmm, I don't know. I feel like Zephyr was a bigger jerk in this chapter than he actually is in canon.

Where's Cranky now?

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Exactly, at least in the canon world he had been born to a humble home and had a sister to keep him straight.

Sooooo, what happens next do they find Rumble and meet his wife Scootaloo, or do they give up the search

7341131 I'm pretty sure they do, because she's been living in Ponyville the whole time Cranky's been looking for her

D'aww~:rainbowkiss:
And I really want to just pop into the story and say "Oh my god! Frickin find your bro already and stop being gloomy bruh!"

You misused tge word Thy.

8121624 I'm not sure what you mean. :rainbowhuh:

8121887 thy is an old word for you

8121980 But isn't that what Pinkie's parents use when they talk? And Luna uses it when speaking in the Royal Canterlot voice. So I'm trying to keep it in character.

8122086 you are correct with the characters using it. However, thy, thou, thee are used as oppose to 'you'. The character using it is right, but that is not the correct usage in the context

8121887 "thy" means "your", as in honor thy mother and thy father... you are right that Igneous Rock would use the word, 'thy' but that is the wrong use of it. Rule of thumb, if you use the word 'thy' and translate it to 'your' and the sentence makes no sense in context, then you have used the wrong word.

So when can we expect ch. 4, the story around Pound and Pumpkin and the fraternal reunion. Not that you need the prospectus of an IRL brother... but I do respond to pms... (discreetly places card on table and walks away whistling)

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