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Luna has been sent to the moon for 1000 years by her sister, Princess Celestia. Let's just say that she could be coping better. She will have to battle with obstacles like her own untamed rage, her missing alicorn magic, the weight of her own failure, and possibly the vilest thing to ever grace ponykind:
Eternal boredom.
Seriously. She could have at least left her a Game boy or something.
Contains: Words and stuff. You have been warned.
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7449014 The timeframe isn't exactly something I put too much focus on. I'd estimate about 75 years between entries? I dunno. Some happen right after another, but apart from that... IDK.
I think you mean 'sun'. Still, this was quite a good read overall.
7468879 Nice catch. And thanks, nice to see you enjoyed!
I will post in this comment once I get a review of this done.
7761475 I have no idea of what you are speaking, good sir!
I have reviewed this HERE.
This now has a "Everything Wrong With"/ Reading Sins by me, feel free to check it out if you want to.
EWW 1000 Years
7837834 Haha, really? Cool!
Get rekt Celestia.
Now. Time to go wreck face.
8033381 *Imperial march plays*
Like this one?
8046049 Yeah, a little, but maybe slightly less murdery!
This was an enjoyable story.
I love how it deals with how Luna spent 1000 years isolated on the moon.
Though I wonder where did she get a diary on the moon? Probably like how she found the hidden candy stash??
Loved The Martian and Castaway reference add a nice touch of comedy
The only nitpick I have is the part about Luna talking about her Ye Old Equestrian Speech. How did she realise it was old fashion? And started using me myself and I when she want back tp that old speech in Luna Ecipse
The ending with Celestia hugging Luna was perfect. There was no need for Celestia to just say "I'm Sorry" to Luna. Action speaks louder than words.
Glad I read it,
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Thanks for the kind words! As to your criticisms, most of them, like the old speech and how she got the diary just sort of boil down to ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. I really didn't think too hard about most of the things in this story. (Because who needs continuity anyways?)
(And wait, I put Martian and Castaway references in there? Huh.
)
You can has review!
Comedic moment: Detected.
The Royal we is actually meant to symbolize that a ruler is not just speaking for themselves, but the country they represent.
Now Steve is all alone.