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hazeyhooves


You'll find, my friend, that in the gutters of this floating world, much of the trash consists of fallen flowers.

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It was an entertaining concept, but felt a little rushed. Try drawing out how they find the clues. If they go to big cities, how do they know where in the city to look? I was also a little disappointed to see a lack of riddles.

I knew the song would be in here XD

Missed this in the Writeoff, but it's a real hoot here. Oh man, the nostalgia.

“The sun, you say?” Rarity looked out the window at the bright summer sky. “Um...?”

“Temporary spare,” said Twilight with a shrug.

This is when I knew it was gonna be great. :rainbowlaugh:

Still brilliant. :rainbowlaugh:

This was a complete 'wat'

Besides, we all know Carmen wouldn't be in Istanbul. She'd be in Istanbull, capital of the minotaurs.

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oh snap!

Istanbull, of coooourse!

Noooooo! I refuse to accept a story where Celestia is the villain! She can't be, she's perfect! Perfect I tell you!!

This was great fun ^.^ I know of the original cartoon, and I think I watched it when I was little, but I honestly have no memory of it. People just tell me I watched it :p

Very cool, and of course the nding improves everything.


Well alright then.

Not Constantinople?

Too bad they won't with that trip to anywhere in North Amareica, but they get a portable TV for their troubles

:rainbowkiss: "And we get promoted to sleuth!"

:facehoof: "You let Carmen get away with the loot. Why on earth would you get a promotion for that?"

7344546 Seconded.

Maybe next time Carmen will be captured.

Player will need to be alert.

Would've been better if you ended it with something like;

Carmen: Spare suns are a dime a dozen player, but I got away with the real one.
Player: I'll retrieve the sun yet Carmen, and next time, I'll catch you too.
Carmen: Don't be so sure player. Se you next crime...

But still awesome nonetheless! :yay:

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That's "Where On Earth Is Carmen Sandiego?" actually. This fanfic is a combination of the CD-ROM game and the live action game show.

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i know, but the idea is still entertaining

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