Rarity and Rainbow Dash must track down the world's greatest gentlemare thief.
You'll find, my friend, that in the gutters of this floating world, much of the trash consists of fallen flowers.
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It was an entertaining concept, but felt a little rushed. Try drawing out how they find the clues. If they go to big cities, how do they know where in the city to look? I was also a little disappointed to see a lack of riddles.
I knew the song would be in here XD
Missed this in the Writeoff, but it's a real hoot here. Oh man, the nostalgia.
This is when I knew it was gonna be great.
Still brilliant.
This was a complete 'wat'
Besides, we all know Carmen wouldn't be in Istanbul. She'd be in Istanbull, capital of the minotaurs.
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oh snap!
Istanbull, of coooourse!
Noooooo! I refuse to accept a story where Celestia is the villain! She can't be, she's perfect! Perfect I tell you!!
This was great fun ^.^ I know of the original cartoon, and I think I watched it when I was little, but I honestly have no memory of it. People just tell me I watched it :p
Very cool, and of course the nding improves everything.
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Well alright then.
Not Constantinople?
Too bad they won't with that trip to anywhere in North Amareica, but they get a portable TV for their troubles
"And we get promoted to sleuth!"
"You let Carmen get away with the loot. Why on earth would you get a promotion for that?"
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Maybe next time Carmen will be captured.
Player will need to be alert.
Would've been better if you ended it with something like;
Carmen: Spare suns are a dime a dozen player, but I got away with the real one.
Player: I'll retrieve the sun yet Carmen, and next time, I'll catch you too.
Carmen: Don't be so sure player. Se you next crime...
But still awesome nonetheless!
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That's "Where On Earth Is Carmen Sandiego?" actually. This fanfic is a combination of the CD-ROM game and the live action game show.
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i know, but the idea is still entertaining