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One courier, one Queen, a simple delivery, and an incredible destiny. The Mojave Wasteland is a place filled with opportunity, danger, and adventure. For some, it is home. For others, a means for power. For the Courier? The birthplace of his legend.
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I'm not sure if this is FoE because I haven't read it yet. I'll give it a go later but if it is FoE: Welcome to the herd! There is this group over at this link in where you could post your story and talk with other authors! I hope I see you there soon!
780743 Its not really a Fallout Equestria fic, more like a PoE (Pony on Earth) Fic set In the fallout universe. Also, I will be using Anthropomorphic ponys, mostly because Its alot easier to write firefights when both main characters have fingers, ya dig? Also, cause Im 'into' that kinda stuff. Hope you don't mind.
a fallout:new vegas crossover? Might as well try and read it befor i think anything of it. :EDIT: Looks like its gona be good, can't wait for the rest of it
Very interesting. If I could make a suggestion, though, indent and separate your paragraphs. Makes it much easier to read.
781592 Thanks for the Heads up... Could have swore It was spaced In google Docs...
Anywho! Any other Suggestions? I need all the help I can Get! *Wink Wink Nudge Nudge*
This seems promising.
AN CilffHANGER
Interesting so far..... Very interesting......
I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
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If I can point out. There's a little error in your spacing when the Courier leaves.
790907 *Cocks Head* What do you mean? The Courier hasn't left Doc Mitchell's house yet?
791680 Crap! Misread...
hehehe... um here.
When night fell, the doctor bid goodnight to the c <--- (Here)
ourier, before leaving him in the bed he had originally woken up in.
Sleep did not come easily that night for him, however. Hundreds of questions swam in his head, and he had no answers for any of them. Focusing on the cloudy parts of his memory, he tried once more to discover important facts about his past life: who he was, where he was born, who his parents were, what he was like before and what he had done to justify being shot in the head. Was he a good person? Was he a criminal? And just what was the truth behind the platinum chip?
All of these questions were still unanswered when sleep finally overtook him.
looking forward to more of this
I like the story so far but I'm curious about one thing in this story was Chrysalis always humanoid or will she become that way when she appears in this world?
813526 All character will be Anthropomorphic, Inside and out of Equestria.
Shits gonna get REAL!!
828202 DAMN RIGHT!
828241 Oh hai!
How is chapter 3 going?
Er... Good, just I need to head to bed In a couple of minutes. Got work tomarrow. So, what do you think so far?
I'm looking forward to more of this. First time I've seen a PoE Fallout/MLP fic, and it seems promising enough.
fall out games
841683
Is there something wrong, Sir?
Oh. My. JEZZUZ@Hotmail.com!
You guys are Amazing! This story has gone by better then anything I could have Imagined! Yay!
Now, I guess I need to give you guys a reward or something? Oh! I know, just a little somethin' somethin' from up her In Oh-So-Cold Canada!
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Keep up the good work
Also when dose he meet queen chrysalis
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Soon... Maybe... 
868318
ok i cant wait
Awesome story bro. Upgrade to Enclave made armor soon maybe?
868641
At the Beginning of the game, Pftt Ha! Yeah, Rig..... *Imagines Chrysalis In Enclave power Armor* Er.... Il take that Into Account...
Hmm. Keeping with the game and yet adding in your own twist there should be down the line finding a vault (Not in the game but your own made up one). The vault can be run down (broken/trashed) and what can be found could play off of the Inter-dimensional Study and Travel (Though through this you could add creatures that are unique but are unable to leave the vault for some reason).
869209
Facinating Idea, I will keep It In mind for Later. Thank you.
Where are the ponies?
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Second Chapter, the last little bit. Next Chapter will have Chrysalis, Changling. So, there ARE no ponies, but Chrysalis Is still from MLP so...
Incoming transmission. Cortex 'Sixteen' loading.
Hmm.
About time one of you meatbags made a proper Fallout crossover.
And it involves Chrysalis, who is tagged as Best Pony in my data banks, AND a Romance tag?
This couldn't get better.
And it's Fallout. And has Chrysalis.
And did I mention that yours, dear organic, writing, is outstanding?
Please, continue.
Logging off.
-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge
Transmission terminated.
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May 6, 2532 (Military Calendar)
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In reality, this story was a test to try out a new writing technique. I am extremly happy with how It went over. Although, there are some complications.
To start off, I require both a new Proof-Reader and a team of monkeys who will help me pool Ideas.
Secondly, since I have little to no experiance on this site, I will need help with that as well. (How to manipulate the site and Its editor, Bold, Italic, Color and all that good stuff)
Finally, I require a cover Image. Thats all, nothing fancy, just a nice cover Image for this story.
If you have any recomandations, please, do not hesitate to send them my way. Also, I would like to extend you a Invitation to the little group of 'Monkeys'.
Awaiting you Reply.
-MyDigitalHazard
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I like the end showing his stats and what not but I hope you don't go crazy with it.
841683, Is it bad I read this in the narrators voice?
900100
Nope, Just makes It more Epic... I guess...
I really like the inclusion of the level advancement at the end. Nice touch.
maybe you can put the characters stats before the level up then to the side in brackets u can put how much each stat has increased upon leveling up.
NOT BAD! This part was really well done and I have no complaints.
Holy fucking wall of text! FORMAT MAN! DO IT! I can't keep track of where one thought starts and another ends.
"13. Format your story properly."
>> *Salutes* ON IT!
At least you fixed the formatting here. I still had trouble figuring out who was talking at points so a quick 'Doc Mitchell said...' wouldn't go amiss.
Nice so far. I give you a 7.5/10 on my scale. You had some SERIOUS formatting errors in chapter one but other than that, I'd say your OC's dialogue is kinda dull. In places, he almost sounds like a fuckin' robot. Keep up the good work and I'll check back sometime.
P.S. The level up screen is a nice touch but you can lose it in my opinion. It doesn't really do the story any justice and kinda makes it look childish.
Writing/posting more soon?
1021305 I hope...
1021318 Writers block? Pls say no pls say no...
1032665
No... God damnit I cant lie to someone with a Creepy avatar, MY ONLY WEAKNESS!
1033174 Hahahha MY GREATEST POWER!
This is good! MOAR! Please?
1135341 I'M TRYING!
I need to replay the game.