What kinda transformation?

Pretty interesting start. And Elizabeth didn't decide to just screw earth over even though she was leaving, considering the concrete sealed door. The demoness' attitude is amusing too. First summon in who knows how long? It's worth being a bit lax and generous with them.

7299558 She has a cutie mark and a pony tail, I think we can assume pony?

7299577 A thousand years, the demon can wait a few hundred more to claw her way out of there. And hopefully by then there will be weapons undreamed of that will vaporize her quickly... maybe...

7299596 ok and what of TG and mental change are for?

Hmm, looks like she got a lust demon there. Robably the least potentiall evil of the types you can get. Never did like the whole black and white description of them all.

Interesting so far. Looking forward to seeing where this is going. Upvoted on put on my tracking shelf.

7299601 TG is, well, you can assume there is only one character changing right now, I think it is obvious who will change gender. Mental changes are, because, there was something significant about the jolt she got that will be revealed slowly.

7299603 I am sure she greatly appreciates your words, but would appreciate a pick-axe more.

7299655 Thank you!

7299704 ok.

Yyyyeah, I think I like ocalhoun's interpretation of that particular concept better.

7300030 Which concept? Demon summoning?

7300033
Equestria in a human. The story even has the same name.

7300044 Wait, what? That story was of the world of Equestria inside someone? How the horse-apples is that anything like this?

I mean, the names are the same, mine is a metaphorical one, not literal. The plot, I think you will find, is VERY different. Maybe you should read this?

Wonder what bunker it is, maybe the one Hitler died in, she could bring him back and they could get it on before taking over the world together?

7300097

How the horse-apples is that anything like this?

It isn't. That's why I liked it better. I didn't really click this expecting to see commissioned fetish porn. Oh well, my own fault for only reading the title, I guess.

7300105 Well, sorry about that. I did make sure it was all in the description but I can see where you could think it was about the same thing.

7300100 If we are talking about his stronghold in Berlin, I would say not. That thing was taken apart quite well and, I believe, is well gone.

7300120 But didn't he & Ava suicide in another bunker which I believe still exists buried under a car park in Berlin somewhere still? He could sure give the demoness some ideas. Assuming that's the bunker, unlikely as it is of course. (Sorry if my day is consisting of random thoughts)

Well, it's off to an interesting start.

It's not tagged as 'dark' so I will assume that, while she may pay a hefty price for the way she came to Equestria, it won't be anything too harsh. Dealing with demons isn't exactly an evil act, but it's definitely not a good one, either. She did at least try to prevent the demoness from escaping and hopefully there are secondary and tertiary layers of wards that the demon hasn't discovered yet that will keep her contained until her power runs out and she has to return to wherever it was that she came from.

Looking forward to seeing where this is going!

She could be greased lightning?
Here's to hoping she didn't leave the book inside her prison with the demon...
Keep going! ;)

A tail?

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Rainbow Dash leaned over Elizabeth, so when the woman opened her eyes she was staring up into a face that was at least one-fifth cooler than any she had seen before.

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While I enjoy the next chapter I will await your reply... Somehow you seem to always respond promptly to every comment! You must be a computer AI that lives on the internet and writes pony.

7776333 My reply? You want a reply? What to?