So, Discord's gotten the grandest idea. He's gathered all manner of chaos entities in one bar in some far off realm to discuss their problems with heroes. This can only end one way: badly, as said chaos entities are the Trickster from Supernatural, the Enterprise's very own Q, Loki from the MCU, and of course Discord himself. I myself pity those unlucky bartenders, Cthulhu and Berry Punch, who have to put up with all of this...
Inspired by the Batman the Animated Series episode "Almost got 'im."
Contains spoilers from "Changing Channels" of Supernatural, Thor the Dark World and Star Trek Deep Space Nine's "Q-Less".
I own none of the franchises featured here and make no money off of them. They belong to their respective owners.
Now given a reading by Wolf Newman:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mgIW7Dq4fpM&feature=youtu.be
Good job 10/10
7330112 Thanks man, though I'm not sure the hint towards The Trickster's true nature was my smartest idea, which may account for the downvote this story has already received.
I just want to say, if you are a Supernatural or Loki fangirl or Discord fanboy I did not intend to mock you with certain jokes said by certain entities. They were made in good fun, and not meant to be written in a mean spirited way.
7330147 well then their in idiot for disliking this stroy, I've benn looking for a story like this for a long time, but you missed one person
7330163 Who'd I miss? Was it a chaos entity?
7330179 ever played skyrim?
7330191 Sadly no, so that might explain things. Who is it I missed, can you tell me a bit about him/her/it? Anyways, glad I fulfilled your desires in finding a story like this, this was one of those stories that I had a grand old time in writing because these are some of my favorite charicters in fiction.
7330198 THE MAD GOD SHEOGAROTH, he's kinda like discord in way, some people told me that their brothers, sheoharoth is known has the deadric prince of madness, he's a funny character who loves cheese, the video below is and explamle of how crazy he can be( not cannon) if you wnat to know more about him I'll give you a link
7330213 Ah, thanks. Like I said, I haven't played Skyrim or many role playing games in general actually.
7330214 But like I said sheogorath is a chips entity
Y'know, with the benefit of hindsight I could have included Apophis from Egyptian mythology, as he is their god of chaos.
Have no idea how'd I'd make him funny though, after seeing how he was written in a certain series of books by Rick Riordon.
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Man you get wrecked by hulk
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God, I loved that movie.
7330264 wrong clip
You: y'know with the benefit of hindsight
Me: oh crap
You:dialbforblog.com/archives/750/untron-hindsight.gif
Me: RUN AWAY
Good stuff, too bad Bill dead cause there was this unuse song he would have lorded over the others.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vq5sZPPF9ao
Nice little story. I really see the reference from the Batman episode, though the fact it was all for a wedding invitation did surprised me.
Unfortunately for me, I nether was a huge fan of Star Trek and I only know of Q because he was act by the same voice actor as Discord.
And I also ditch out of Supernatural during the season Heaven and Hell wanted the Winchester Brothers being the host of their respective leader, since I wasn't following so much anymore. So I have no clue who the Trickster is.
*slow claps*
I haven't even read the story but I can already say I'm disappointed there is no bill cypher.
7330325 the trickster was actually Gabriel the arch angel, who was known as the messenger of god but got tired of his brothers and sisters fighting and waning over the apocalypse, and so went into witness protection, and took over being the trickster. though in the end of his story his brother lucifer killed him. it really got good up to the end of season give went though some season rot till 9/10 then im guessing a writer sold his soul to crowley to make the show great again,
Read me it has cookies
7330978 No offense, but couldn't you have covered that up with spoiler tags so the people who haven't gotten that far into Supernatural could still be surprised?
7331123 Sorry didn't know how to do that, My apology
7331128 All you have to do is press the little tab right to the left of the emoticon symbol and type in whatever you want to be covered by spoilers, sorta like bolding text or putting them in italics.
As someone who watched Supernatural The Trickster is Loki not really it's the Archangel Gabriel
7331463 Yeah, I thought about Loki accusing The Trickster of stealing his good name, but alas, that never made it in sadly...
Haha. I thought Discord and Q were going to end up being the same, uh, being. Since they're both chaos entities and 'played' by the same actor.
7330366 ITS CIPHER YOU SPELLED IT WRONG
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PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR MY SIN AGAINST MR. CIPHER!
7330978 Ah, now I see it's covered up. Thanks.
7332609 Yeah, I myself have played with that little possibility in another one of my stories but I so wanted to write them mocking each other and that sort of thing here.
7332691 Hmm... ALL RIGHT!! ALL HAIL THE MIGHTY CIPHER!!!
7334066 Actually no, it's the Archangel Gabriel under a sort of angel witness protection.
7334629 Yeah, he should have been there but I completely forgot and I don't know enough about him anyways so I probably wouldn't have been able to do him justice.
7335225 And now you've got me thinking back to the Supernatural episode "Changing Channels" where one of the TV Shows Sam and Dead got trapped in was a Japanese quiz show called "Nutcracker". Take a guess why it's called that and what happened when you got a answer wrong on it.
7335290 Yeah, just looked up the basics of him on his Wikipedia entry. He sounds interesting enough, and I regret not knowing about him sooner and leaving him out. Then again, I'm not sure if having a sixth chaos god would make things a bit too overcrowded or not. If he did get in, he'd probably be like Berry Punch, and having only about one or two lines sadly.
It's really interesting how you mixed these universes in one main area. And the remixes you put are awesome.
The only downside I can say about is that it's similar too another story I read long ago... No, not Batman: the animated series, I'm referring to this one. However following an important rule of creating a story is what saved you (adding different concepts or re-telling in a different way).
Consider this an upvote.
7336550 Yeah, I read that story and loved it. Hey, just asking here, but how many of the little references and in-jokes did you catch?
7336554 Aside from Discord only the Loki ones, since I'm not that familiar with the other ones (aside from Q but I don't like Star Trek anyway)
Discord and a bunch of other chaos and trickster beings in one place? Along with Berry and cathulu? Insta fav without even having to read it. And after reading it guess what? I was even more right than I thought I was. Good job.
-BFBL
The only thing that honestly surprises me is that it is implied that Fluttershy can identify asgardian whisky by smell alone. Unfortunately with so many characters of chaos it is a bit disappointing that the only one to stand out to me is the shyest and quietest of them all.
It is apparent that you were trying to normalize them and prove that they can be dangerous and rational, but it was a bit lacking in chaos. I think a style like the deadric prince of madness's little shindig in skyrim would have been more entertaining. Throwing spells at each other along with disastrous pieces of advice could have been hilarious.
However this is just me trying to give feedback, which only means I liked the story enough to give said feedback. Quite the story my good sir.
7753275 Of course, that implies she's been to one of these little shindigs before... Poor girl.
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Now there's an Idea.
Loki quirked an eyebrow at Discord before gesturing to the seat next to him as he asked, "So what's with the plushie?"
"Oh I just thought you would like to see one of the simpler solutions to that green menace you faced a while back," Discord said with a smile while Fluttershy nervously sniffed her glass then wrinkled her nose.
Loki gave him an unamused glare. "How can THAT excuse for a puppy deal with a literal monster?"
Without another word Discord snapped his fingers and a large bear materialized behind him holding it's back in pain.
Fluttershy gasped before flying over and whispering, "Don't worry Mr.Monty I'll make it feel all better with a quick deep bone massage."
Loki's eyebrows proceeded to raise up into his hairline as Fluttershy proceeded to perform manuevers that most wrestlers could only dream of before turning to discord and saying, "Have you considered retiring? I think your world spawns enough chaos on it's own."
"Oh believe me I've thought about it, but the day I did the world managed to become just a little bit too chaotic for it's own good," Dsicord replied with a knowing grin before taking another sip of his drink, "But that I'm afraid is a tale for another day."
7753369 Oh god, when I finally get around to writing the second chapter I have got to put in a reference to THAT.
Exllcent and funny fic here aloved the chaos gods talking (you could have also used chaos from Disney Aladdin
Yknow, no Cipher, but I like the Supernatural nod. He may not be a God, but, Jim Moriarty would fit well at a table with chaos lords, cause he causes a lot of chaos for Sherlock. And Joker as well, who needs no introduction.
He. Feels like a Villian Pub episode
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I thought so too.