I like cake, pie, and ponies :D
When the great and powerful trixie starts harboring feelings for twilight sparkle, she does the most insane thing ever. Twilight seems to have also developed a crush on the great and powerful trixie. And when trixie is caught stalking twilight sparkle, twilight invites her to a slumber party for an entire week. What will happen over the course of an entire week?
(on hiatus until I finnish The draconian Curse, Hehe sorry guys...)
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That last line Pffft. Instant win.
There sure are a lot of Twixie stories popping up. I like it.
Also Furst Yush.
XD
What a entrance... i'm interested now, keep it up!
50696 thanks!!
I'm still just a beginner so I don't know how it'll turn out though! 
I guys it's me again
Im going on vacation to the philipines!! So I probably won't be able to work on the story until I return on January 1st 
anyway see you guys then!! happy holidays!!!! 
i'm noticing alot of capitalization errors.. especially with names...
oh and the formatting is getting in the way, making it hard to read...
but i will wait for more...
Well I can't wait for more :3
Hi guys!
I'm back early!! 
so I guess I'll get started right away! 
and another thing I'm gonna be making a new fan-fic called the elements of chaos part one be sure to check it out! Kthxbai!!
the story is going nicely but you seem to have a few error's here and there.
such as in the last paragraph you forget to make a new paragraph when Apple Jack talks after Fluttershy...
but keep them coming!
"There was a portrait of Twilight sparkle on the wall along with some creepy poems, weird photos, a bottle of lotion and a stack of playmare magazine."
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This might just be the best title I've ever read for a chapter. Really good stuff, the odd error here and there and the paragraphing could do with some fixing up, but still definitely a fun read.
ok pretty good but you should really watch the pony puns otherwise they seem out of place when you dont use them, case and point
Trixie couldn't wrap her finger around it. It just didn't seem like Twilight would have a "special" friend. Trixie paused for a moment and wondered hmm what if... sry if it seems like a rather petty nitpick but i do like this fanfic very much keep it up
oooo thats funny
Ha trixie's in trouble now
Hi guys I'm sooo sorry I haven't been working on the fic for such a long time
it's just that I got the second semester coming up and all that so anyways, please just be patient I'll
thanks for all the advice and support! I'll get started on the fic as soon as I can! Kay thanks bye! 
Get started on it in a few days I promise!
WHAT A TWIST!
Horn lengthening solution
That one cracked me up!
Dude, make it a clop. then i'll track
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This. I would also add that every time a new person speaks, a new paragraph needs to be made. Other than that, this story has potential.
Wow
