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Lekmet


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Twilight has had a stressful day. Working all day, with barley any rest. She thinks she can she can relax but... Sadly not.

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I like it. :twilightsheepish:

It's short and fun. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Alchemik deleted Jun 12th, 2016

A strange dream for a first story? Approved. Have a like.

Hah! This was hilarious. Good job! :rainbowlaugh:

Since this is your first fic, I'll not judge too harshly. You did a pretty good job writing the comedy in Twilight's dreams, keep it up! :twilightsmile:

7346224 Please judge it like normal. I need to know what to make better :P

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Well, if I were to judge it harshly, I'd say this story wasn't really that interesting. It seemed that there were very few events. Perhaps you could make it better if you added Twilight's worst embarrassing fears.

7348506 Didn't think of that: thanks!

1000 words exactly?

I approve. :moustache:

Uh... Not sure what to say:rainbowlaugh:. I'll check it Out later

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