209 18 649 Statistics Blog Posts Download .txt Download .html Download .epub Report Story E A strange dream MLP: FiMComedyRandomSlice of LifeTwilightApplejackSpikeCelestiaLuna Twilight has had a stressful day. Working all day, with barley any rest. She thinks she can she can relax but... Sadly not. More Less Chapters (1) What... · 11th Jun 2016 · 1,000 words 1,000 Download .txt Download .html Save Chapter Order
I like it.
It's short and fun.
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A strange dream for a first story? Approved. Have a like.
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Hah! This was hilarious. Good job!
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7329506 You're welcome. ^_^
Since this is your first fic, I'll not judge too harshly. You did a pretty good job writing the comedy in Twilight's dreams, keep it up!
7346224 Please judge it like normal. I need to know what to make better :P
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Well, if I were to judge it harshly, I'd say this story wasn't really that interesting. It seemed that there were very few events. Perhaps you could make it better if you added Twilight's worst embarrassing fears.
7348506 Didn't think of that: thanks!
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Always happy to help
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1000 words exactly?
I approve.
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Uh... Not sure what to say. I'll check it Out later
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