• Member Since 7th Mar, 2016
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andrizzi


Feel lonely? Need an editor? A proofreader? Somebody to talk to? Write me. I've been detached from this fandom, I want to make up for it.

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After 1000 years of dreamless sleep, finally Celestia has the chance to reconcile with somepony she loves.
Now that Her sister, princess Luna, returned from her exile, it should be easy to be friends again.
Right?


First a big thank to my friend P, who helped me editing this story.

I consider the story completed, but I also have a little Idea for a continuation.
Maybe as an extra chapter or maybe as a sequel...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Not bad. A bit short and lacking any real impact, but it was still nice.
I would put out the two "today, in the..", they are breakig the flow.

This was nice. :twilightsmile:
Short but to the point. I like that.
I'm not complaining about how the show handled it. It's a series aimed at children that needs to get to the point. They don't have much time for tearful reunions but that's the fans are here for. :ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug:

7772651 Yeah, I understand why the drama between Celestia and Luna has never been studied in depth, but it still bugged me.
I always thought that their relation was something beautiful, sad, and realistic.
Also, I don't like how the show is drifting away to Celestia and Luna. (We didn't have a single episode about them. Only a couple of cameos! What the apples:ajbemused:)

7772760 Yeah I guess you're right.
Oh well, that's what the fimfic writers are here for! :pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

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