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Michael Hudson
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I.. um... ok gota admit the Luna/Scootaloo sex scene really threw me off this story.. especially if Luna's gonna be her mom now.. ug just..
Anywho personal opinions about that aside I'd love to see this continued as a story. Luna remaking Scootaloo and A Bat pony/Lunar Pegasus has story potential all on it's own. Luna then adopting Scootaloo has another layer that could be explored and would be fun to read.
I loved the concept of this story and overall execution. The sex scene sorta freaked me out, especially the Scootaloo being absorbed into Luna part. I would love to see the reactions (and consequences) to Scootaloo's change and Luna becoming her parent. If you have it in you, I would like to see this continued, but I completely understand if you don't.
These comments:
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The guy in the back is totally me. Foalcon? Tentacles? Transformation? Yeas.
But dat ending:
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this whole thing is just a images.encyclopediadramatica.se/thumb/5/57/Diabeetus.jpg/180px-Diabeetus.jpg machine.
LOL I have no fucking clue what their talking about. .
Soo... Lunas mane fucks then absorbs them for her to give birth to shortly afterward?
Seems legit.
I imagine this is all going to lead to some awkward mom-daughter dinnertime conversation...
So, first we have some slice of life, then we have some sexy times, then it gets awkward, then we get some feels. I approve.
Was expecting standard foalcon clop, got so much more than that.
Well done.
Mom+Luna= Scootaloo +daughter= sex × transformation =Akward dinner time conversation and possibly more smexy times.
Well, I enjoyed that.
If there is one thing that could be said about this story that is universally positive: it's really, really original.
Lots of great feels. A sequel would really be great actually.
I, too, would like to see a sequel.
Sequel
7847226 I agree
But, how does Luna explain this to Celestia? Especially after failing to mention earlier that this one really is an orphan? And how does Celestia react?
I can't help but feel Luna's room is really crowded at the end there... like there is some unnamed thing taking up most of the space.
ELEPHANT: "Oh, that's just me!"
Shut up, no one wants to address you! Damn fat assed unnamed things, always butting in and taking up space.
LUNA: "MY CHICKEN WILL FLY" !!!!!
huh...I...am...speechless...what...the...hell...did...I...read?