The year is 2042, it's been 10 years since my race has been enslaved. We have lost all dignity, branded and labeled as inferior after the invention of steam ships. We are now forced to serve on the admirable steam ships or work at dock yards in exchange for a home. The work is arduous and grueling but it's all we can do to keep our wings, to remain in our home. I on the other hand no longer have a home, I was cast out, not meeting the physical standards for work in the clouds. since I couldn't pass the test they removed my wings and expelled me from society. I am sentenced to death for my weakness, branded, unable to fly like the rest of my kind, with the rest of the Pegasus.
Chapters (13)
A good idea, but I cannot give feedback after this cliffhanger.
Submit this to Equestria Daily. Right now.
This definitely deserves to be featured.
A++++
Great chapter, but I've been noticing some grammar issues. You've used "your" instead of "you're" and you said *sigh* which would be be better as "he sighed". Other than that, I'm excited about the next update!
Pretty good, you need to reread your chapters though before submitting them. I think that would help with the amount of grammatical errors I'm reading. Overall, I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up
Sorry it took so long. I am seeing great improvement in your writing. You still use words like 'soon' when you shouldn't. Keep up the good work.
Sweet, first post...... but keep it up, its really interesting, you got me hooked sir or madam
This is so far a great story please continue.
Welled. Not weld. Tears don't weld your eyes shut.
Other than that, it's intriguing. Very intriguing.
well when i started reading this fic i had no idea id be in it
Great story 4.5 hearts out of 5
and half a 
the only things I found wrong is you missed a few spaces and some of you words where off like you said qnd instead of and ext.