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XenoPony


Hi, name's XenoPony. I'm an avid pony writer and fan fiction author with a wide range of stories.

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After finally getting some peace and quiet following the trouble regarding her lazy brother, Fluttershy is left with a curious question. What exactly did Rainbow Dash and Zephyr do at the Wonderbolt's headquarters that resulted in him coming home in such a shocking state? Fortunately for her however, Rainbow Dash is willing to tell her everything, no matter how stupid it is.

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This just confirms Rainbow's friendship with Fluttershy doesn't it?, if she's willing to put up with his brother.

Not a whole lot happening in such a short fic, but pretty funny and good, harmless fun all the same. Have a like and favorite. :twilightsmile:

Rainbow doing it for her sister in all but blood.

I'm guessing all of those missing commas and periods were taken up to see the Lord in the great Punctuation Rapture.

Sounds like something Zeph would do.

Am I the only one who thinks that Zephyr Breeze is pretty much a ponified Tom Sawyer?

7281106 I know this is unrelated to the story, but your comment made me think of this:

"Then I asked him to clean all of the team’s gear, but all he had to do was tell Soarin I was the one who wanted it done and for some reason he just went and did it all for him!" She went on, confusion surfacing in her expression.
Despite everything, Fluttershy couldn't help but giggle slightly at that fact, and her response only added to Rainbow's puzzlement.

Flutters the SoarinDash shipper? I approve!

Seriously, Dash and Fluttershy must be good friends if Dash is willing to put up with Zephyr for her.

7281106 Wooee, cleanin' this gear suuure is fun!

I wonder what his nickname was...

7287869 The world, may never know.

There isn't really anything much happening in this story, but since it's intended to be a little story, I'll not judge it too harsh. You have my like.

I liked it; it was short, sweet, and to the point. Very cute. It's nice to see the measures Rainbow Dash is willing to go for Fluttershy. :twilightsmile:

But now the mystery of Zephyr's nickname will forever haunt me. :rainbowderp:

All in all, great job mate!

-GTU

Gee, I wonder why Soarin did all the work.. When he knew DASH was the one asking for it to be done... :rainbowlaugh:

WHY MUST YOU CURSE US WITH THE MYSTERY OF HIS NICKNAME!?!?
Lazy Breeze?
Lazy Butt?
Any other Lazy names?
Uh... I can see why you didn't give him a name now :rainbowhuh:

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