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You've all heard that "Creepypasta", right? Or. maybe you'd prefer it be called "hidden meaning." Well, whatever you want to call it, I lamented on it, and wrote a story. I don't care if you guys like it or not, I was up at 4:50 a.m with no Internet, and this happened.

Whatever.

Anyways, enjoy.

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Comments ( 37 )

Hmm. Are you sure that writing stories in the dead of night is such a good idea? :applejackunsure:

I enjoyed it

773803 U KNOW U WANT TO

773725
I don't like you very much now.

I actually did enjoy this story. It's actually fairly accurate.(I've studied psychiatry for several years now) . Having PTSD would cause thoughts/actions of harming your tormenter, but she also seems to be at the age where she doesn't really understand what death is. Living in a constant fantasy was her way of coping, even though most children tend to do this...

Sorry, rambling... Lol. Anyways, very well done.

774437It's alright I'm just playin

773725
Thanks. Because, you know, the number 1 thing I wanted to see before I went to bed was FUCKING SMILE DOG
I was trying to avoid that picture!!

774152 I HATETH YOU, GOOD SIRE!

773725

You made me sneeze.

773725 Your comment needs about 20% more Jeff the Killer.

Oh my dear author. This was cute compared to what I could do :3

774650 Don't know what you mean broski, SMILE.DOG can be a pretty good looking chick.I mean, just look at that figure
i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/277/970/6b0.jpg

I'm suprised of all this reception I'm getting over a dumb comment.:pinkiegasp:

773725(sarcastically)yes , because the thing everyone needs before bed is traumatic pictures before going to bed.:facehoof:

775603Just because some random person tell u do to something doesn't really mean u have to do it duh but if u want to be my guest

773725 i love you for posting these:pinkiehappy:

77567It went over me to post such a thing

775646No I avioded them beacause I saw what it said plus it wasn't done (the page)loading ,but when it did it scrolled up on its own.Sorry im just a bit grouchy due to my rude sis.:twilightblush:

775725 I updated my comment sleep well suckers!!

775733Okay......well goodnight to you too?

well, it's 11;45 and I'm officially too scared shitless to sleep, so I'm just gonna go read my little dashie and try to forget that.

not bad!

This was not very scary to me, unfortuantely. I really expected to be scared shitless, but relying only on squick, insanity, and abuse does not make some thing scary or frightening, at least for me. My expression barely changed the whole way through. Sorry, but I really think you could do better if you tried. maybe it'd be better if you weren't writing in the middle of the night. My advice is, if you wanna really scare people, think of one of your worst fears and write down something that makes you, personally want to huddle in a fetal position in a corner. Chances are, if it scares you that much, it'll scare a lot of other people, too. I look forward to seeing you improve. :twilightsmile:

no offense, but "You've all heard that "Creepypasta", right? Or. maybe you'd prefer it be called "hidden meaning." Well, whatever you want to call it, I lamented on it, and wrote a story. I don't care if you guys like it or not, I was up at 4:50 a.m with no Internet, and this happened."
I know what a creepypasta is, but I've never heard it be called "hidden meaning". are you referring to a specific creepy pasta?

779757
Wowzers, I come back to see all these comments!

I'll just reply to yours, and answer a few others in here.

By "hidden meaning", I meant those conspiracy theories that sprout out for every cartoon. "Rugrats" was all Angelica's imagination, Ed Edd and Eddy is Limbo, y'know...crap like that.

To answer everyone else:

This wasn't meant to SCARE you. This was merely a fiction that I wrote because I realized that no one had actually gone into further detail to fully explain what happened with Pinkie being insane and creating all this. It wasn't supposed to give you nightmares, or make you not want to sleep. It was just an explanation and an exaggeration on that theory.

780321
oh... Yeah, sadly, I've heard people mention them, but I can't find nearly any. I'm really interested in seeing Rugrats and maybe Phineas and Ferb (not sure if there even is a P&F one, though)

780347
I'm not sure about that, either. I'll link you to the few that I know of:
Rugrats:http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Rugrats_Theory
E.E.&E: http://thecolligere.com/entertainment/television/ed-edd-and-eddy-overanalyzation
M.L.P: (Well, I can't find the EXACT theory. It's really just something mentioned because...NO ONE EVER WROTE A STORY ABOUT IT. *cough cough*. So, I found you another "theory" that I personally really enjoy.) http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/My_Little_Pony_Theory

There are loads more, just go to Google, and try "Cartoon conspiracy theories". Have fun!

personally, I think everyone makign a big deal of not being able to sleep after seeing those (comment #3) images are being dramatic. They're not very scary. the scariest on is the jump scare, and I was prepared for it. Though, I must say, the bedroom ghost is rather unnerving if you look at it too long

I found pinkie's theme song.
Watching you by the white tie affair. :pinkiecrazy:

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