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CarnationArrows


...the arrows of carnation the fire shoots off.

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Dr. Hooves was sleeping, and the next thing he knew, he was in a bridle!
Dr. Hooves is captured by two mysterious figures, but is saved by a colt. He follows the colt to safety and discovers a profound dark secret that would change his view on magic forever.

Despite this horrible fashion not his choice, he's found a new friend.
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A story edited by TheDawgBrony
Written for the One Worded Prompts 's June word, which is.... well... bit.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 2 )

Not bad! :raritywink:
I liked the idea of the multiple definitions of "bit", and it's interesting to delve into pre-civilized equestrian history.

But... does it means that Celestia came after Starswirl? It's a bit confusing

7564163 Celestia's rule came after Star Swirl's timeline if that is what you were asking about. Thank you for complimenting my story. :pinkiehappy:

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