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Lonelydarkness
I find the use of language to be not a tool, but an art form. It is something that I strive to improve every day, and I think you should, too.
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Oh, I know Tezcatlipoca. A human with the powers of Tezcatlipoca? Luna and Discord are gonna be pissed that someone is horning on on their turf. (Though he's human, so no actual horns. :-))
Haven't read the chapter yet. I'm not normally a fan of "god just spontaneously decides to give up his power/half his power to a human", but it's Tezcatlipoca, so I am intrigued.
Holy Crap! you're still alive!
Welcome back!
7317356 It's good to be back, friend! I have actually been thinking of this for a while, but haven't had time to write it.
7317170 I hope to hold your attention then!
7317361 Well, glad to see you back on the saddle(Horse Puns), also, the little upside down 'v's are Chevrons. Celestia would know this I'm sure.
So I take it that Celestia and Luna are going to be arrogant bitches in this fic?
7317635 I kno dis, dude. I'm a PV2, I have a chevron! (lol)
7318754 Arrogance is relative, my good human. They are relatively arrogant to the perspective of our protagonist, if that's what you're asking!
7319660 Fair enough, I just found it a bit odd that a centuries old ruling monarch who seems much too serious for her own good wouldn't use the proper term in her internal monologue.
7319711 Outwardly serious, yes. But not always internally so, apparently. lol
I like it so far my eye is on this one.
*Before reading*
"Tez is here? Might as well..."
*After reading*
"Eeyup, keeping track of you..."
Is this story dead?
This story made it into my fave list with just one chapter, this is very rare, i hope it remain interesting.
Also
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They are coming.
i await another chapter patiently.
I cant wait for the next chapter
Hahaha please don't stop.I love this story, and it's only been 2 chapter's.
This was really entertaining and interesting, glad that i found this fic
An...interesting story start, please...continue.
MPR vertere in die illo regnabit ad tenebras? quia elegit auctor opus ad update de litterae ejus!
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I'm afraid my Latin is far too poor to understand this, so...
Wat?
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joyous day for the darkness to reign! for the author has chosen to update its work of literature!
This story, intrigues me.
I shall be watching it closely.
Hmm... strange plot. To end the peace in Equestria - or Mythos - and get 'em off their fat asses.
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Exactly, and what better race than humans to do it?
So his car jumps a bit and he gets a flat tire but how did he die? (I mean outside of the duel)
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Had the jaguar not intervened, his tires would have hit the ground at an angle and he would have rolled. An acquaintance of mine died like that in high school. His car only got a foot off the ground at 30, but that's all it takes.
here you go
when the moon hits your eye like a big pizza pie, that's amore
Why do they talk like khajiits?
Short chapter is short.
YAY! UPDATE!!! this is great! Hopefully he can induce the good kind of change, if not? THEN LET THE CARNAGE COMMENCE!!!!!
Interesting start.
Huh, the Badlands... Chryssie never gets to do peace and quiet, does she?
Best bughorse!
... Xenolestia strikes back.
Jeez, are these ponies pathetic.
Well, that must be nerve wracking for her.
I wonder what the gods did to the changelings in the past.
I really liked the description for the changeling city, rather atypical take on the concept.
This is a fantastic story and I hope to see more in the future.
AAAAAAAAAAAA THISS IS SO VERY GOOD AN AM EXCITED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!
More please!!!
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Soon...
He gave her a gun neat
Well, this must've been traumatic for her. I'm half surprised she didn't faint from sheer relief.
Now this guy here knows how to pick a welcome gift. I always liked the idea of militarised changelings alluring, especially that they can easily adapt to any control scheme.
Hah, nervous Twilight is nervous.
So far, quite interesting.
'She wiper her' - wiped
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I thought with her age (Chrysalis is around 200 years old in my mind) that she could handle it better. That's why she had such a speedy recovery. (I've also read a little about the psychological differences between males and females, and women tend to recover from minor emotional trauma much faster)
I also like the idea; that's why I wrote about it! Any artist, of any kind, will always make something they like. That you guys happen to like it just makes it that much nicer for me.
Thanks! (This is why I need an editor)
I am... torn, about how I feel towards this chapter. On one hand I enjoy the story, and I didn't have anything really that bothered me about this chapter, except that the gift is a dang GUN. I don't understand why he would do that, it is literally just giving a DEADLY weapon to a complete stranger, and I am going to be honest, I almost stopped reading right then.
If it isn't a bother I would like an explanation of his thought process, because it just doesn't make sense to me.
This has been a genuinely good read thus far; the main character, after becoming either a demigod or the avatar of a pre-existing deity, wanders the new world he was dropped on, searching for a patron race. Upon finding the first race that didn't outright attempt to attack him, he immediately starts uplifting the only race to show divinity some form of proper respect.
Hail to the king, baby.
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Incredibly succinct, astute, and an Ash vs. the Army of Darkness reference? Holy shite, I'm in love.
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I've been trying to cut back on the rambling; thank you for noticing.
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Not at all, I appreciate critiques and comments in all their forms. Hope you continue reading!
Mmmmm, changeling city state with a massive advantage in technology soon to be achieved, should be interesting.
Taaaaaaanks! :D
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