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SuicidalAngel


Cute, fluff, and love stuff ^^

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After failed attemps by Fluttershy to get her brother a job, she takes last resorts and asks Rainbow Dash to find him an easy job with the Wonderbolts. It doesn't end well.

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Finally. I've been waiting for someone to write about this all day!

Spitfire did not just call him cute XD
I like the story thought haha I was sad when they didn't show us what happened in the episode.

7276346 So was I, it would've been more interesting that the Spike bit in my opinion sice we only got to see Spike being taken advantage of again...:fluttercry:

Oh gosh, this was great :rainbowlaugh:

This is the scene that Hasbro should have added. But I think they left it vague so that fans could make glorious artwork like this :)

You should make this into a comic XD

"Complaing!?" Zypher asked slightly offended. Spitfire smirked.


That would be actually a little heart breaking since he's been under the presumption for years that RD is attracted to him, yes, it's the complete opposite, but RD doesn't even try to let him down gently.

OMG... seriously Spitfire??? :facehoof:

7276524 I know what you mean, but Rainbow just isn't a lovey dovey pony. I like to think that if she were genuinely attracted to somepony, she would be a bit more tender amd caring. I also tried to avoid her bringing up the subject, it being more or so brought up by other ponies or Zypher himself. She didn't reject him personally, but the others made it fairly obvious she didn't like him, at least in my story.

Loved the ending!:rainbowlaugh:

He was fired...LITERLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh:

spitfireXbreeze no?

Dammit...I just realized I've been writing Zypher instead of Zephyr. Same letters...different order. Dammit.

hahahahaha, amazing :rainbowlaugh:

7277819 Cute! I love your art style!:rainbowkiss:

Yes!:raritystarry: Just yes!:pinkiecrazy::heart: You gave me something I never knew I needed,gah thank you!XD
I love it, jealous Zephyr is just tooo cute and precious and funny:rainbowkiss: I would have never thought about this kind of conflict for this episode, but it makes sense since we're going to the Wonderbolt base and all:twilightsmile: Anyway, I ship one side Zephyr crush on Rainbow so hard and open to a Zephyr x Rainbow shipping, so for me this is was candy:raritywink: Lol:derpytongue2: And dat ending with Spitfire thinking Zephyr was cute is priceless:rainbowlaugh:

7278561 Thank you! Personally, I only see it as one sided and only appreciate the fanfic opportunities the Zephyr x Dash ship opens up in regards to Soarindash. I can imagine it being really funny in the actual show though. :rainbowlaugh:

SPITFIRE WTF :facehoof: Ahem, I mean, I LIKE THIS STORY

Spitfire calls him cute. Rainbow's jaw drops.

"SERIOUSLY?!"

... AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! SOARINDAAAAASSSHHH! YYYYYYYAAAAASSSSSSS!!!!!!:raritystarry:

Dat ending though XD

"Honestly..." everypony's eyes widened. "He was kinda cute..."

WHAT?! SPITFIRE SERIOUSLY?! I loved your story! Thumbs up 👍

WHAT THE BUCK SPITFIRE !!!!! I THINK YOU HAD ONE TO MANY APPLE CIDERS

This was a fun short story to read. Loved how Dash wanted to help Zephyr out but he's just so obsessed with Dash he can't get out of his own way to help himself. I thought Soarin was going to flatten Zephyr for mouthing off like that to him. Bravo!:rainbowlaugh:

Well apparently Zephyr couldn't handle this job as well and it looks like he left his jealousy got the best of him as always besides rainbow is not even interest in Zephyr anyway so he needs to get through to his thick skull and Fluttershy will not like to hear what he did and Spitfire wow I never thought she likes him lol this was a pretty good story keep up the good work

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