Pacific Glow lives the kind of life most ponies would dream of having. Her mother is ritch and pays all her expenses and she is the heiress to her mother's company and wealth. She has no responsibilities and no limits set by her mother or anypony else. Her nights are spent dancing and her days as she pleases. So why is she constantly miserable? Why is she always out of her family's mansion and why does she always have a pacifier around her neck?
While he may be better at baking Lemon Tart loves music. Any job where he is accompanied by bass, strings or pleasant song is welcome. As such he has worked in a club before and scored a job with another one now. Unfortunatly a side effect of working in a club is being social. Not the easiest thing for a grumpy Introvert such as himself. Still he's got bills to pay and there ain't no rest for the grouchy.
What did commas ever do to you?
7286804 Sorry about that I try my best with grammar but comma placement was one thing I've always had trouble with. Thanks for tracking the story though I should have chapter two out no later than tommorow.
I would suggest looking around and seeing if you can get yourself an editor. A lot of folks are willing to on this site. If you find someone you can send them a chapter before you publish it and they will make sure commas are placed correctly and all that jazz
7287447 I'll see what I can do. I have some friends on this site who might b able to help with that but they've been busy lately.
Awesome! Though you should have space between the conversations
7289765 Thanks! I also asume the new like is yours so thanks for that too! I should have the next chapter out today or early tommorow.
7289800 of course. I kinda like the pacing and the story seems to be so... Enchanting slice of life so I must leave a like
7289835 You humble me sir! Thank you I'm having a lot of fun writing this because the characters are so fun! I hope I continue to please.
7289874 More like lady, anyways Can't wait for next chapter to come out.
Nice chapter. When Glow's Mom daid Pacifica I quickly thought of Gravity Falls Pacifica Northwest
Aww this chapter was cute
Love that we got a new background pony
7295650 I'm glad too. I love how this fandom just needs like a five seconed appearence of a well rendered character and BAM! Fan fics! lol!
7295919 Agreed, but it seems she is the only new one? I mean, season four and five had some promises, but it seems they just got left behind. I'm not talking about Maud and Tree Hugger, due to them being guest ponies. Also, what is up with FIMfiction not having Cinch, Lemon Zest, Indigo Zap ect up as options?
7296007 100% agree frankly it would be nice to have a sci-twi option too since their different.
7296380 Exactly, it doesn't really make any sense as to why they didn't place them up. I mean, the third movie was ok, granted, not great. But still
7297017 Ya I have my complaints about the movie too but Sci-Twi was the films saving grace. I liked her character well enough that I found it enjoyable.
This chapter was so sweet
7303758 Why thank you I'm hoping to get back into writing this soon I'm having a little troube with lack of time at the moment but bit by bit the next chapter is comming togeather.
Hey, so I am going to admit that I have been skimming the chapters in this story for a while, (I tend to skim before I read in detail to see if I like the story), and I have to say that it is nicely done. The only thing that I am having a slight problem with is this chapter and that is because of how the mother is portrayed. To clarify, the mother showing no love to her daughter is not the problem, but the fact that it seems that there is no reason for the mother to not love her daughter. I could see if she was just too busy, if Pacific Glow reminded her about someone she hated or disliked, or if she constantly set standards that Pacific never seemed to reach, but currently it just seems like the mother had no love for her daughter at all since birth. I don't know if you plan or answering why the mother shows no love or not, but that is the weakest part of the story right now in my opinion. Other than that, I'd say you have a solid and enjoyable story here.
EDIT: Okay, so two minutes after posting this comment I went back at a slower pace and saw that it is the shame of social status that made her keep a child she did not want to have. Sorry about saying there was no reason for the mother to show no love to Pacific. That will teach me on commenting on something when I have only skimmed the story, right.
7386300 LOLZ! Don't worry about it! S'all good!
I know there are some loose ends in the story but it's not even close to finished yet. Since this is a slice of life piece with little to no action you need the characters and their life experiences to be the hook. If you had all the answers as to why things are happening and every problem was resolved as soon as it occurred then there would be no suspense and no reason to keep reading. Rest assured there is still much more to Glowy and Lemons story as well as Azure and Show Stopper's but we have to keep some professional secrets for now won't we? 
I hope glowy is okay
Can I kill her mother? That's not a way to treat a girl who is on drugs and less her own daughter. Like she didn't asked to be borned, is her fault. Please Lemon give the poor cute strawberry cutie love
We need fan service!! Give us the fan service!
7390653 Muhahahahahahaha!!! -Does the doctor evil pinkie smile-
Better get dibs on that I'm tempted to steal it!
7390712 Just more fan service. You can steal it
I'm dissappointed. Was expecting a nice story about best Pinkie clone, and instead got a barely-comprehensible slur with nary a use of punctuation.