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Scout Feather


Writer of Fillies doing lewd things and Ponies doing cute things. People seem to dig that stuff around here. Commission Status

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Cloudchaser and Flitter are not only sisters, but best friends. They live together, share secrets together, and have always been there for each other when times are bad.

On a typical Friday night, Flitter is home reading and Cloudchaser is out on the town. When a date goes all wrong and Cloudchaser is left distraught, there's only one pony in all of Equestria she wants to see.

Flitter's book will have to wait.

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Comments ( 13 )

Aww, so sweet. As far as I can see, this is one of the few stories with them that focuses on their sisterly relationship in a non... Well let's just say it does it in a non disturbing way unlike some of the others I've seen.:pinkiesick: That fact alone gets you a upvote.

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'Friendshipping' in general is pretty sparse. Thanks for reading!

7258556 Huh, that's odd. You would think for a show with Friendship in the title there would be more. (Shrugs)

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Whoa! I totally wasn't expecting that. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

This is a lovely little heartwarming story you've written. Much enjoyed!

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Cool! Thanks for reading. I love reading these comments :D
Stay tuned though. A little birdie told me there might be a fantastic audio reading showing up sometime soon! It's gonna be sweet!

Well, this was certainly a delight to read. Sisterly snuggles are good. Role models and appreciation, though? It just adds so much more. :twilightsmile:

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Very nice, I feel like a lot of thought went into this and I liked it. :)

Very sweet story, and very well told! If I can pick one nit, it's the transition from Flitter as main PoV to Cloudchaser. You may want to insert a few blank lines to clue in the reader. Overall, it's a wonderful read, and brought back the warm feeling of growing up with my brothers and sisters around me. Well done!

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I'm glad you liked it! I always enjoy reading your reviews of my stories, so I'm glad you liked this one.

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You're not the first to point that out. I didn't put a heck of a lot of editing into this, because 1)It's a simple short story with very minor plot development, and 2)I was (and still am) in a bit of a creative rut I was trying to get out of. Thanks for reading!

This was really sweet. I don't have a sister, so I finally it a little bit difficult to relate but I do have a best friend who would probably behave the same as Cloudchaser did. This was a short, but concise little story. Thumbs up for you. :twilightsmile:

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