All Scootaloo wants for her birthday is to be able to celebrate it with somepony. But why is everypony ignoring her? What did she do to deserve it? Well...it looks like this year is going to be just like all the others. Lonely.
Or is it?
My real name is Kyle. I am 25 years old. Born and raised in a small town called Terre Haute, Indiana. I grew up in a family of motorheads and street racers and I love muscle cars. Questions? Ask away!
All Scootaloo wants for her birthday is to be able to celebrate it with somepony. But why is everypony ignoring her? What did she do to deserve it? Well...it looks like this year is going to be just like all the others. Lonely.
Or is it?
In looking forward to the rest of this story! It has a very nice beginning..
Thx. It's a little too fast in my opinion but it's doable
Scootaloo is going to have a surprise birthday I'm calling it now unless she exepects that to happen but it doesn't mean spirited but it would be funny
7332592 You'll just have to wait and see
7332737 that's author yes that's going to happen but it's cliché so I'm scared to admit it
7332743 are you absolutely sure that it will happen?
7332774 I hope I'm wrong but if that does not happen it will be because of me
7334149 like I said, wait and see
It could need some fleshing out with a bit more description of the environment and the behaviour of the ponies. Goes a little too fast for me and I have the feeling I know how the rest will be playing out. It has potential though.
7336232 I'll admit it's not my best work. But in all honesty I couldn't think of anything else to write
Don't beat yourself up. I thought it was okay. While I am looking forward to more chapters, I have to say that this sounds like a repeat of "Party of One."
This is so sad
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My other stories are even sadder
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I am going to read them
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Sweet! Let me know what you think!
The ending was sweet.
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I'm glad you liked it
quite an interesting start
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I’m glad you think so. This isn’t my best story, as it was thought of pretty much on the fly, but I’m glad you enjoy it ^^
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yep heh