• Member Since 5th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 24th, 2023

loopertooper


Brony, gamer, and I want to design games when I grow up. I have a WILD IMAGINATION and sometimes like to write. If I do write please don't be afraid to criticize me. :) /)

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A pony looks for a home that is peaceful, but it never comes to pass. Now he is going to Ponyville, will this be his home or will this be another adeventure waiting to happen. Now he must decide if he will let Equestria fall for a few days of peace and quiet, or will he fight to protect all of Equestria, especially Ponyville.

Chapters (5)
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There are some stories where it's about a mysterious stranger, yet the author needs a bit of help launching it off the proverbial ground so it can soar with fluency.

There are some stories that are adequately fluent, yet have bad themes at heart.

THEN THERE IS AN UNREADABLE CLUSTERFUCK OF WORDS MORE INTERTWINED THEN THE CONTORTIONIST VERSION OF THE HUMAN CENTIPEDE.

It's not even a story if it's barely coherent and I don't like doing this! I don't like flaming a story I CAN'T EVEN READ! Even after all these words. For the love of god use the enter key! It's your proverbial flame-proof shield.

Oh, and your OC looks two Dadaism paintings had sex with a horse. SCRAP IT.

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