Rainbow Dash loathed to think of herself as "sentimental." And yet, with her new penpal exchange, she finds herself not only hoarding the letters, but re-reading them as much as Daring Doo novels. Between work and stressing over her replies, Rainbow gives little thought to what drives their conversations. They are natural—flowing as easily as the water over Rainbow Falls and at the same time heart-wrenching. Finally she must face the inevitable question. Can a lasting relationship form from the exchange of a few letters?
Cover art a commission by ZeeDee/Kell95 on FIMfiction/Deviantart.
Chapters (3)
Interesting idea. You've definitely caught my attention. I eagerly await the next chapter
Will there be chapters that are told entirely through letters?
7233282 I doubt it. I prefer a mixture of narration and letters.
You have my curiosity... let's see if you can get my attention!
Excellent work so far!
So you finally came about to send it to fame!
Good for you!
looks great Blue
Rainbow and Trenderhoof? Now that is an unusual paring
Lovely as always.
I always enjoy reading a story about a pairing that I never would've imagined. I'm already digging the chemistry between Trenderhoof and Rainbow.
Nice! You've hooked me onto this! (Which is easily done for me) I can't wait for the next chapter
I like this, I like this a lot!
You're missing the word "off" in between "ear" and "for".
Technically, there should be a comma after each "maybe".
There should also be a comma after "fashion".
Enjoyable so far, keep up the good work!
Final note: Was "pen-pel" in the title intentional?
This was really nice. You can feel a genuine friendship form here and an attachment to eachother. I can't wait to see what the next letters bring and how much further the two can develop. Be hilarious to see how Rarity reacts to Rainbow being in Mares Monthly and being a good friend of Trenderhoof
Amazing story thus far. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
I really like this format. Instead of just showing the entire letter, we get to see the thought process of Trenderhoof and Rainbow as they read the letters a few sentences at a time.
Lovely piece Blue. Smiling afterwards.
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Damn you're stealing my job.
looks good Blue
Not bad, liking it so far
Considering they befriended Discord, I think Trenderhoof deserves some slack
Lovely chapter as always.
Now this... Is an unlikely ship
nice
This is great so far! I was smiling ear to ear
7247914 Glad to hear it!
Looking forward to reading more. Keep it up.
I'm really hoping for more on this one.
Add more please! It’s so good so far!