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Bluegrass Brooke


Gonna try this whole writing thing again.

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Rainbow Dash loathed to think of herself as "sentimental." And yet, with her new penpal exchange, she finds herself not only hoarding the letters, but re-reading them as much as Daring Doo novels. Between work and stressing over her replies, Rainbow gives little thought to what drives their conversations. They are natural—flowing as easily as the water over Rainbow Falls and at the same time heart-wrenching. Finally she must face the inevitable question. Can a lasting relationship form from the exchange of a few letters?


Cover art a commission by ZeeDee/Kell95 on FIMfiction/Deviantart.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 32 )

Interesting idea. You've definitely caught my attention. I eagerly await the next chapter :twilightsmile:

Will there be chapters that are told entirely through letters?

7233282 I doubt it. I prefer a mixture of narration and letters.

You have my curiosity... let's see if you can get my attention!

Excellent work so far!

So you finally came about to send it to fame!
Good for you!:scootangel:

I snuck around and read it before you published it...heheheeeeee.


Still a good story.

Rainbow and Trenderhoof? Now that is an unusual paring

I always enjoy reading a story about a pairing that I never would've imagined. I'm already digging the chemistry between Trenderhoof and Rainbow.

Nice! You've hooked me onto this! (Which is easily done for me) I can't wait for the next chapter

I like this, I like this a lot! :moustache:

Comment posted by DashiesYandere deleted May 22nd, 2016

The last time she showed the remotest interest in an outfit, Rarity had talked her ear for two hours. Never again.

You're missing the word "off" in between "ear" and "for".

Maybe just maybe she wanted to be a friend.

Technically, there should be a comma after each "maybe".

Mares want fashion not action!

There should also be a comma after "fashion".

Enjoyable so far, keep up the good work!

Final note: Was "pen-pel" in the title intentional?

This was really nice. You can feel a genuine friendship form here and an attachment to eachother. I can't wait to see what the next letters bring and how much further the two can develop. Be hilarious to see how Rarity reacts to Rainbow being in Mares Monthly and being a good friend of Trenderhoof

Amazing story thus far. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I really like this format. Instead of just showing the entire letter, we get to see the thought process of Trenderhoof and Rainbow as they read the letters a few sentences at a time.

Lovely piece Blue. Smiling afterwards.

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Damn you're stealing my job. :rainbowwild:

Comment posted by Skye Mist deleted Jun 4th, 2016

Considering they befriended Discord, I think Trenderhoof deserves some slack

Lovely chapter as always.

Now this... Is an unlikely ship

This is great so far! I was smiling ear to ear :pinkiehappy:

Looking forward to reading more. Keep it up.

I'm really hoping for more on this one.

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