This story is a sequel to Pinkie Pie: The Amazing Spider Mare
Hold onto your seats, true belivers and newcomers of all ages! Everyone's favorite web slinging super heroine is back, and this time she's facing the ultimate enemy, a villan that knows everything about her!
When a mysterious meteorite comes crashing down from the skies, it brings with it an unexpected passenger that will turn Pinkie Pie's life upside down. Soon, Spider Mare's got a brand new suit to fight crime with, but it seems to have a mind of its own. And it has no quarrels about hurting or killing evil doers, putting our webslinger's moral code on the line!
As if things couldn't get anymore complicated, Cheese Sandwich has come back to Ponyville, hoping to start up a relationship with Pinkie Pie. But is there room in our webslinger's heart, when her past love life ended in tragedy?
Powerful forces and difficult struggles bring about the rise of a new super villan, the likes of which Spider Mare has never seen before. The fearsome symbiote known as: Venom! Pretty soon, it's an all out webslinging showdown, and only one will come out on top!
So sit back, and witness this dramatic new chapter in Spider Mare's story! Will she be able to earn her happy ending, this time?
(Tagged alternative universe due to the events of Season 5)
I feel sad that Carnage isn't gonna be in this.
7308389 Oh, he will be, just not until much later. Right now, we need to wrap up Electro's story and get to the battles with Venom. Carnage is spun off from the same alien that spawns Vemon, at least that's what his origin story was last time I checked (it bonds with convicted serial killer Cleetus Cassedy, which is when it offically becomes Carnage). And since Spider Mare has yet to encounter Venom, there cannot be Carnage.
As for who Carnage will be, if you want to know that you'll have to PM me.
Ah...... I think this is the start..... of a BEAUTIFUL and BITTER rivalry.
Hey there. Not much I can say other than excellent job on the exchange and emotional content in this first chapter. I have to admit, I feel sorry for both Cheese and Pinkie, but, well, on to the next chapter.
Not much I can say here except excellent job on the action, exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places in this chapter. Well, onto the next chapter.
Not much I can say other than, once again, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places in this chapter. Well, I know it's going to be almost a year before you get around to Volume Four of your "What If?" series (which I know this has nothing to do with), but here is a possible idea:
Swarm of the Century: Pretty much avert the "Poor Communication Kills" stuff and have Pinkie clearly explain the trouble the Parasprites are AND how she knows certain types of music can drive off the Parasprites. Instead, make the Parasprites smart enough to cut off the Mane Six from any musical instruments, meaning that the Mane Six will have to think of something else.
That is, of course, assuming you like the idea enough to do it. If not, I profusely apologize for wasting your time.
Hey there. Thanks again for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll read more of this story later, but it's probably getting pretty close to dinner time, so I will have to put that on hold.
Hey there. Thanks again for sharing this work with us. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Again, excellent work on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places.
Again, splendid job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Now, I have another couple of possible ideas for Volume Four of your "What If?" series:
"Magical Mystery Cure": While I can understand and respect why you don't wish to combine the story with "Equestria Girls", maybe you could still make it a multi-parter with an actual villain so that it goes into better detail on certain things AND so that it looks a bit less like Twilight getting excessively rewarded for cleaning up her own mess.
"Pinkie Pride": Possibly avert the "Poor Communication Kills" part by having Cheese explain MUCH earlier on that Pinkie was his inspiration and having Pinkie and Cheese decide to work together from the start to make the party twice as good (though Pinkie still gets a little jealous from how good Cheese turns out to be, except that she feels guiltier about the jealousy). Okay, mind you, the episode was pretty good as is, but even good episodes could be better.
For the comics: The Issues that have Cheerilee's class taking the field trip in the woods (mostly rewritten to show at least subtle hints of Diamond's future redemption [such as Diamond worrying about how her mother will take it if she doesn't come out on top and/or expressing semi-reluctant gratitude for one or more of the other students helping her out of a big mess]).
Then again, if you don't like the ideas, I WILL profusely apologize for wasting your time.
Again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.
Hello there again. Once again, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.
Again, you did a splendid job on the exchange, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.
Hello there again. Once again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. As for the future identity of Carnage, I'm not going to guess except I already KNOW it WON'T be Discord because 1. He might be heavily into chaos, but he's no murderer. and 2. Discord is already powerful enough WITHOUT symbiote enhancement. At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
...... *sigh*
Hey there. Not much I can say other than thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. And, while I definitely feel bad for both Pinkie and Cheese right now (even if I know it will turn out all right in the end), I will still be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
..................... alright. Critique time. As a Venom fan, more specifically the Eddie Brock Venom, I will have to say....... it's not BAD but....... Venom feels more like Carnage in this. The symbiote anyways. It feels like it's leaning towards Spider-Man 3 Venom.... and nobody likes that. I do like that you're using the Mary Jane stand in..... but the symbiote is feeling more like when Mac Gargen or Angelo Fortunato used it..... and honestly that uh..... that um.......................... yeah. I do NOT like where it's going.
Not much I can say other than excellent job on this latest chapter. The exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. As I said before, even though I already know it's going to turn out all right in the end, I still feel bad for both Cheese and Pinkie right now. And I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7325286 I say go for it, a teenage Apple Bloom would be a nice out of the box casting choice and I'm curious as to how that would work.
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, splendid job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Now, I have a couple of ideas for a couple of possible future sequels if you like them enough:
1. A year after this story is over, Garble ends up getting ahold of the symbiote (which augments all of his dragon abilities AND grants him super-sized versions of Spider-Mare's powers) and ends up becoming Cheese's replacement as Venom (Garble has enough hatred to fuel the symbiote, enough muscle to be an even better candidate and enough stupidity for the symbiote to easily be the one in control, not to mention upgrading a dragon actually increases the symbiote's resistance to intense heat]). This time, Pinkie needs the help of OTHER super-heroes (namely whoever you choose as counterparts to the Fantastic Four) to deal with the menace. After narrowly losing to the combined efforts of Spider-Mare and the Fantastic Four after a very rough fight and only barely escaping the heroes, Venom II (aka the symbiote-enhanced Garble) realizes he needs help for when the heroes face him again. To that end, Venom II springs the Green Griffon, the Rhino, the Mane-Iac, Scorpion and Electro to operate with him as the Sinister Six.
or 2. Whoever ends up replacing Trixie as Mysterio (either an obsessed fanpony with a knack for special effects, a bitter rival stage magician who thinks he/she would make a better Mysterio than Trixie ever was or any combination of the two) could try to steal a mystic artifact powerful enough to make the Alicorn Amulet look like a foal's toy. Spider-Mare tries to stop him/her only for the artifact and the villain to both end up pinballing through dimensions. Celestia, Luna and Twilight all combine their magic to help Pinkie travel through the dimensions to chase Mysterio II and recover the artifact. Over the course of her adventure, Spider-Mare ends up sharing an adventure with Spider-Lady (her Equestria Girls counterpart who ends up gaining spider-powers of her own), a film-noir inspired version of herself from a dimension that has a culture very similar to the early-to-mid-1930s, and a Spider-Mare from a hundred years in the possible future (and may or may not be a future descendant of herself and Cheese). Of course, the four spider-powered heroines also have to keep the artifact out of the hands/hooves of not just Mysterio II, but also other villains from each heroine's native universe. (needless to say, this story idea is LOOSELY based on the video game Spider-Man: Shattered Dimensions as well as on the "Spider-Man: the Animated Series" series finale to a lesser extent)
Your choice which sequel idea you wish to do, if either. If you don't like either idea, I completely understand and profusely apologize for wasting your time. At any rate, I will still be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Oh wow...... okay yes. Now we're getting more into Eddie Brock territory. Oh yes. I love the interactions he had with Rarity and Spoiled. Rarity especially.
Hello there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
...... and now you brought him back to Carnage level when you said Cheese Sandwich was gonna feed him. UUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
7334100 The symbiote in general feeds off its host, there's even a comic showing what would've happened to Peter if he hadn't ditched the alien suit.
7334137 Okay. No, no, no. That was an Alternate Universe comic and isn't even CANON to what the symbiote does anymore. You are thinking of the Ultimate Marvel version of Venom. This is 616 Venom. The most it does to it's hosts is make them more powerful and angry or straight up just gives them a power boost.
Edit: and even considering the power boost originally it just gave Spidey organic webbing.
7334144 Actually, SPB12 is referring to a "What If?" comic, which was written YEARS before the Ultimate Universe was conceived. In that comic, the symbiote ended up not only draining Spider-Man dry, it also ended up bonding with the Hulk and possibly Thor as well. I don't know (I only read ABOUT that particular "'What If?'" comic; I never read the comic itself).
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7334398 Yeah but still.
It's actually not and those were mainly done so that we can have Venom be extra villainous and not at all how the comics portray him as just trying to get revenge on Peter humiliating him on a scoop that, believe it or not, turned out to later on be RIGHT.
Hey there. Once again, thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, VERY good job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
..... I'm...... unsure of how to take this.
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, splendid job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Just one thing, I don't know if I missed it because I was skimming the story at first, but I don't recall reading about Shocker in this story series yet. Unless I'm mistaken, I think you mean "Electro" rather than "Shocker".
At any rate, on to the next chapter.
Hey there. Thanks again for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, splendid job on the exchanges, action, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I have to admit, your choice for Carnage DID catch me by surprise. I would have expected Tirek or Chrysalis to end up in that role (they're just about the only two canon MLP villains evil enough to make a good Carnage). Oh, well. I respect the fact that this IS your story. I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, action, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. And yeah, your pick for Carnage DOES make sense. Besides which, I suppose Chrysalis would be a better pick for the Chameleon (mainly because she is ALREADY a shape-shifter) anyway.
Just out of curiosity, do you have any picks for the OTHER Marvel super-heroes that Spidey often works with (the Fantastic Four, Daredevil, etc.)? If not, I profusely apologize for wasting your time for the question.
At any rate, I will still certainly look forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7343658 I DO have plans for The Fantastic Four, and plan to use them in a sequel involving The Sinister Six. As for The Avengers and The X-Men, I have ideas about who they'd be (for example Shining Armor would undeniably be Captain America and Fancy Pants Iron Man, the two fit the roles to a T with Shining Armor being a royal guard and Fancy Pants an artisocrat/politican) but I don't forsee including them for the near future.
7343660 Okay. Thanks for letting me know. I greatly appreciate that.
7343937 Perhaps that's a story for a sequel. I don't really know of any stories or comics where Cassidy rejects Carnage like Eddie Brock does.
Oh hi Fantastic Four foreshadow.
Hey there. Thanks for getting this last chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, very good job on the emotional content, exchanges and wrap-up in all the right places. And yeah, I definitely caught the Fantastic Four foreshadowing at the very end. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to seeing who you cast in those roles (though I'm betting on either Twilight, Time Turner or Moondancer for Reed). At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of your work as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
I like how you create your villains. Smart what you did to ponify Dr. Curt Conners.
Oh man. I was hoping you would do Emo Pie. Just for the fun in it of course
There is a sequel right?
7446150 Eventually (hopefully) yes.
7446432
YAS!!
I'm looking forward to it!
I never did watch the movies, only the second amazing Spider-Man movie, tell me what did happen to Dr. Connors after the Lizard incident? Did they turned him back human and sane or was he just turned sane, but got stuck as a giant lizard, or was he killed?
7585597 I don't know, I never saw the movie all the way through.
venom would have seen everything anyway because a symbiote can see all over their body with or with out a host
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well both rainbow dash and Venom have a moral compass well venom has a twisted moral compass i but still a moral compass rainbow dash would be a perfect host for the venom symbiote
unlike carnage and lightning dust which have no moral compass
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