• Published 28th Mar 2017
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Submitting to the Great and Powerful - Budget_Player_Cadet

Trixie demonstrates the latest mesmerizing addition to her magic shows to Starlight Glimmer.

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Comments ( 48 )

Pretty decent hypnosis play, even if the emphasis on consent and lack of any conflict aren't my things.

Very nice to see some good old consensual hypnosis again. Also triggers and toying with Starlight's mind, what's not to love. :twilightsheepish:
Would love to see more like this from you.

I did a hypnotization story for Trixie and Starlight.


A good text-based induction takes time. 2000 words is not too much for it. If it's in a more interactive setting, like a chatroom, it can move a little faster, but these things are generally slow-burn. I've seen people take as long as half an hour for a good, deep trance, then another two hours to actually do fun stuff with it.


This would be a good candidate for a reading...

Damn, sounds similar to "Friendship is Mind Control", I guess I'll be putting this in my read later :twilightsmile:

Damn, this was good.

This was pretty interesting. I like the progression through the chapters. Just a creative application. I dig it.

The best kink is made of equal parts good pretalk and foreknowledge, good aftercare, and a good scene. :twilightsmile:

Oh noes, my covert hypnosis attempt has been found out! And I intentionally went out of my way to hide it!


I really enjoyed these three chapters, though my trance in all hypnosis related content never goes farther than, I guess some meditation. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

They may go to a Ponyville Hotel in Room 69.

Well, this gets an upvote. It's just so well-written, and I like me some hypnosis... I hope this gets a sequel some day. Nice work!

Not going to say it... Don't you dare say it!

~Sincerely, your dreamer.

God fricken' dammit.


Currently in progress. Knowing my work ethic, it should be out sometime between the midterms and the heat death of the universe. ^_^

8073440 Wait, really? That's awesome! You know what? You get a follow. I don't want to miss this. :derpyderp1:

Wow. I'm speechless. I got hypnotized myself and, well, really sucked into this story. This is by far the bestest fanfiction I've EVER read in the whole history of fanfiction, no questions asked. I don't even know what to say other than, AMAZING, TREMENDOUS WORK and YOU SHOULD REALLYY MAKE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS :raritystarry:

This is my favoritest book, fanfiction, writing piece, you name it, that I've EVER read in the whole history of ever!!!!!!! Keep up the incredible work!!!!!!!

This was interesting. I definitely like that, although it was a mind-control sex fic., it was a consensual mind-control sex fic.. Your hypnosis seems to have only had a partial effect on me, and a delayed one, at that. I only up-voted and tracked this story:derpytongue2: (Yes, I know that it's already completed, I put it into "Tracking" anyway.)

Your Dreamer

The Great and Powerful Trixie commands her aroused, tranced Dreamers to go to the nearest bathroom, lock your door, strip down, play with yourself for a little bit, then cum to my sexy body. Once you're done, you will wake up from your trance and remember everything that you've done before then.

Come on, what are you waiting for? The Great and Powerful Trixie commands it.


...There are two types of people...

8108073 Those who hypnotize, and those who dig deeper into my hypnotic eye.


:rainbowlaugh:Don't worry, technically all of your safety commands still apply, so no one would get hurt.:twilightsmile:

Though I'm not sure about whether or not the consent was part of the hypnosis... Oops:derpyderp2:

8108586 :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
:trixieshiftright:Trixie will be pleased

:pinkiegasp:Wait a minute, if we all have experience in hypnosis, then why won't we start a group where we could write actual hypnotic fanfics?:rainbowhuh:

That way, we could make a genre dedicated for hypnotising the reader! We could finally get some more hypnotic text and thus make it easily available to the public. We could make genres for whichever kind of hypnosis, whether with mental healing or fetishes:pinkiehappy:

8108627 Good girl.

:pinkiehappy:Thanks for putting my story for read it later, I like some criticisms if you don't mind?:trixieshiftright:

8108768 *moans*

Ay, no probiez! It looked like a cool story :pinkiehappy:

And, yes, of course, I will >///<

8108792 How hypnotizable are you?:rainbowhuh:


Er. . .I've never tried. But this story did, indeed, hypnotize me. . .:rainbowwild:

Why? Were you thinking of doing it to me yourself:duck:

8108801 Not sure:applejackunsure: I do however am also required to give consent before hypnosis.

We should continue this conversation on private mail:twilightblush:


O-okay. Send me a note. . .I'm kinda new here.

8108073 We'll come back to this moral dilemma eventually, I'll just leave you this confusing message:twilightsmile:

8114065 The problem with doing a pinkie induction is that the only way this is even remotely in-character is if it's a confusion induction, and I honestly don't know how to do those very well.

8116249 Seriously!:pinkiegasp: You should like make a whole series on this hypnosis thing, if not, a whole book collection. Me the Dreamer couldn't find anything that can get the reader in this amount of depth in any story I ever find so far. I'm already supremely addicted to story:yay::pinkiecrazy: I seriously can't stop myself from reading it. I've read the latter two chairs three times already.

Hmm... Dreamer thinks she'll read this one more time...

:applejackconfused::facehoof: Darn it, it happened again!:ajbemused:

Is it possible to resist being hypnotized?

Yes, I constantly resist hypnosis everyday of my life whether consciously or not. It's very easy if you ask me, not so much for some people :/

Well then, why not read the nonsense all over again and see what happens?:rainbowlaugh:

Could you elaborate?

Comment posted by Fabian Corcair deleted Dec 1st, 2018

I am yours Trixie

Sincerely, your dreamer

Welp, this is definitely going on my clop shelf. Thanks for the story, it had good characters with a nice bit of romance, and it was hot.

~Sincerely, Your Dreamer

:coolphoto:Ha, the Great and Powerful Brony philosopher does not acquiesce to such lowly demands...

Has something changed of Brony without his notice?:trixieshiftright:

This was a really lovely read! I'm happy to see such a sweet hypnosis mind-control fic...I've never liked non-con, so this is actually exactly what I've been looking for! Thank you for writing this!

~Sincerely, somepony else's dreamer

A year and a half, and this is still the only mlp fanfiction that attempts to hypnotize people. Trixie is not bemused:trixieshiftright:

Trixie's so sweet to Starlight. It's nice.

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