...closest anyone's gotten to getting me into a trance from text. Still not completely, though; relaxed, but no inclination to obey. (also because I am not a big fan of Trixie ).

At least it was slow. Sometimes writers do it painfully fast. I understand full inductions are not exactly economical for writing, but it's irritating when it's like "you are under my power *POOF* it happened" sort of induction.

Loving this story so far, it is so nice for yet more caring hypno stories,
Sincerely, your dreamer

What was this supposed to do? Because all I read was nonsense

8056622 I think what it was is that the writer put us in Glimmer's PoV.

8056622 it was a hypnotic text script, designed to relax you and put you in a trance...

This is actually a really cool story. I love the whole 'hypnosis for pleasure' idea. Good job.
~Sincerely Your Dreamer

I have yet to be hypnotized but I do love the idea and this was very well written. I just can't relax enough.

Sincerely,
Your Dreamer.

I'd love to hear this being done. I can only read so much before my breathing leads to my eyes going closed and unable to read any more of it! It did help calm my breathing, and I did spend time trying to push out those thoughts that were bothersome to me.

That... made me feel very relaxed and tingly. I followed the instructions and shut everything else out.

And I'd love a reading of this chapter, at least. :D

I love how you've captured the thing about hypnosis that i find really appealing. and the amount of detail in this is nice. I like the pace and the feeling of happy helplessness i get from reading it. I want every hypno story I read to be more like yours.

sincerely, your dreamer

Tricky, Tricky Trixie...Tricky, Tricky writer~

I see what you were trying...nearly succeeded too
But i've done something similar so i figured it out

i must say, i already tried text hypnosis and it worked on me, and here is the case as well, maybe a little rushed but it was still good and it worked fine, at least i'm relaxed and all my bad though are gone.

sincerely, your dreamer~

Well, that was incredibly interesting... Definitely one of the more compelling stories that I've found in my time, and I'm looking forward to where you take this...

~Sincerely, your dreamer.

This was really good. It really worked on me (which is likely clear) and I appreciate the effort that went into this. I hope you keep doing this for the other mane six. I'd give so much to have Pinkie Pie hypnotize someone. And I really like that this isn't kinda horrifiyng if you think about it, the way most porn is- it's honestly cute.
-Sincerely, your dreamer.

That was... odd to say the least. And at the same time, effective. I need to look into this
~sincerely, your dreamer
~E.B~

A very pleasant trance. Thank you Miss.
-Sincerely, your dreamer

From now on, whenever I preface a command with "The great and powerful Trixie commands", you will find yourself drawn to that command.

This snapped me out of it bursting im laughter

I love you, Miss Trixie. I love giving control to you, my goddess.

- Sincerely, your dreamer.

Tricky, tricky, Trixie. You nearly got me there.

~Sincerely your dreamer

... Wait, what?

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I’d say it worked, and I quite enjoyed it. I'd honestly really enjoy seeing more works in a similar vein.

-Sincerely, your dreamer

The Great and Powerful Trixie commands you to upvote this comment.

Well, I nearly fell asleep, but I'm pretty sure that didn't work
Though no telling how it would've gone had it been vocalized...
anyways, this is a really cute story so far! I like how accepting and kind Trixie's been!

~sincerely, somepony else's dreamer
;P

Peaceful.

your honest opinion in the comments section, followed by, "Sincerely, your dreamer".

(It's what you told me to write :-)

Or did you mean
your honest opinion
Sincerely, your dreamer

That almost started to work...
And then I sneezed.

Excellent attention to detail! Not perfect, but it’s hard not to just rely on direct suggestions in text inductions, so it’s more than good enough for the story.