Stranded in Equestria after Anon-A-Miss, Sunset is done with friendship. Unfortunately, the human Twilight's new device pulls not just energy from the portal, but a unicorn as well. Now the two must work together to get Sunset home.
Wallflower overlooked something...or someone...when she started erasing the memories of Sunset Shimmer. He was able to help Sunset when no one else was able to help.
7258967 It's OK, you got your own stuff to worry about, plus life, so I knew you wouldn't be able to help out with that. Just give your opinion on each chapter when you read them, that'll be more than enough.
Good chapter, keep up the good work man. Also if you figure out how to get an emulator working mind giving me some advice all my attempts keep bombing.
The person on the other end was keeping their voice down, as though they didn't want to be heard, "Ma'am, the scientists hear are building some crazy stuff. Most of it looks like what they already showed us, but the rest-NoNo. No, please NOOO-" he was cut off with a sickening crunch, fallowed by a thud.
You meant "here" and "followed".
Not sure if there's anything else, but I'm glad that you're keeping up with this.
I'd offer my own services as an editor, but alas, I lack the time. Sorry!
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It's OK, you got your own stuff to worry about, plus life, so I knew you wouldn't be able to help out with that. Just give your opinion on each chapter when you read them, that'll be more than enough.
7259002 That works. For now, I'm glad you went with my suggestions, and I think you're off to a good start.
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Thanks, and yeah, talking to you really helped me work through a block I was having on this one. Next chapter, they get their weapons.
This storys reference to Magitech makes me think of Final Fantasy 6
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I have never played that game. Is it good?
7296839 Very. I would highly recommend you try it, I have played it many a time on an SNES emulator
No big. Things come when they come, I get that. As for the villains, I suspect involvement of some version of the Changelings, but we'll see.
Good chapter, keep up the good work man.
Also if you figure out how to get an emulator working mind giving me some advice all my attempts keep bombing.
7305321
First: Thanks
Second: What do you mean by 'emulator'?
I was talking about the programs used to play counsel games on computer
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Oh, OK. I'm definitely not going to be much help there.
...Well, if it makes any difference, I think it needs one.
You meant "here" and "followed".
Not sure if there's anything else, but I'm glad that you're keeping up with this.
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Fixed, thanks for pointing those out.
And I'm not giving up on this anytime soon. I have plans.