I love to read stories, and I try to write things that I would enjoy to read. I am on an inordinate amount of time, so if you feel like talking, or asking something, pm me and I'll respond quickly.
Page generated in 0.58 seconds
Total duration
732 users online
1,107,436 hits today, 2,311,953 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2025
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2025 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
i wanna know too because there was no mention of metal in the conversation between your Mc and his friend
Honestly, I have no idea what metal is being talked about, either, since there wasn't anything mentioned about it.
i assume the rings or box is metal or somethin
7235221
7235151
7235168
Sorry. That was a bit from the rough draft I forgot to remove. I've fixed it now, I think.
7235248 By deleting the chapter?
[edit] Never mind; it's back up.
7235248 fun
As long as there's a new chapter I don't care just please continue the story
7239564
There's one in editing now.
Ah, Batbloom; tried and true... Still, I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapter, as I've really and truly enjoyed these last two... And I'm sincerely hoping she doesn't discover Human Transmutation, even though I can already imagine that it's going to lead to AB peering through the Gate of Truth... I wonder if Homunculi are going to be created...
Yeah, I can so see AB trying to raise the dead soon. Hmm, been a while since I've seen a Xanth reference, wonder how well that universe would do as a crossover.
Nice redo!
I would say well done on the shock of facing death for the first time. it's quite convincing to me, anyway. Enjoying this story so far, eagerly awaiting more unread chapters to transmute into more read chapters.
Is the chess game of the gods back on?
7275511 It depends on what you mean by the chess game of the gods. The senior Demons are god like, but they get bored, so they gamble on the actions of mortals, as the actions of mortals are the only things that they can't predict.
Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update please and thank you
7381041 Sorry. I'm at a summer camp for work. I'll see what I can do though
7275544
7275511
I believe, GrandSpear, that the answer to your question is no. Nura, I assume that your fic is not meant to be included in the group "The Chess Game of the Gods"?
"me reading what ponies eat"
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS BBBBBAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCCCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rather glad to see an update, the comedy made it worth the wait.
7581522
I know, right? Why can't they use this explanation as verbatim for any Human in Equestria story?
7581522


DITTO!!!!!
WOOOOOOOOOO!!!
also the chapters are too short hope you fill-it up more for each chapter!
Sorry if I sound like a prat. But I get so miffed about authors saying that meat is a major part of a humans diet. It's not. It's a minor part of our diet.
Author, I want you to think, really think about how much meat you eat in a week vs. how much fruit, veggies, or anything else.
7583522 does pizza count as meat because if so then its a big factor of my diet and by big i mean BIG!
I thought you were dead man don't scare me like that I thought this story would never be updated every again
7583522 I apologize for the misunderstanding, but when I say major, I meant important. Yes humans can survive without meat, however we are built to eat meat AND plant matter. Strictly speaking, the body cannot work at peak efficiency without some meat in a person's diet. You are correct that in terms of quantity the majority of humans don't eat a lot of meat in relation to everything else, but they still eat it as a vital part of their diet, and when speaking to a (presumed) herbivorous society, any meat is more than they are used to.
Also, I'm the wrong person to ask about meat intake, I eat an average of 1.5 to 2 pounds of meat a day, sometimes more.
Okay, 2 things. 1, when Twilight learns about Aaron's book, the resultant scene will be hilarious. 2, I wouldn't mind crossing over with this at some point.
HiE/FMA crossover fic? Sign me up.
Is this a Displaced fic?^_^
Taking bets here, which will Twilight be more enthralled by: Aaron, or his book?
7599516
24.media.tumblr.com/c4b8f12016e305d4b6d36ae8d7c5d3af/tumblr_mkws36UgVu1ry10fwo1_400.gif
7599555

I imagine twilight may be trying to do alchemy herself...
dont teach twilight alchemy just dont it wouldnt end well
Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter
Can you replace the 'Know' with 'no?'
HOLY CRAP, THAT'S A XANTH REFERENCE! It's been AGES since I even though about that...!
Also:
It should say "Alkahestry"
7585448
Good sir, I would be more than willing to embark on a crossover with you at some point in the future.
Oooooh, he's good.
Nice chapter
I want someone to write an anon story or something where the guy gets restraining orders on pinkie and others
Lead = LEED = Present tense verb, meaning "to go first."
Led = LEHD = Past tense verb of the above.
Lead = LEHD = A heavy metal.
So when you say something like, "Twilight lead them into the library," it's pronounced "Twilight LEED them into the library," which isn't right at all.
i.ytimg.com/vi/5cuzj7i1Whs/maxresdefault.jpg
7829124 I think I saw that idea before...
This is really good, I can honestly say I want to read more. The way this story is going is really intriguing and I can't wait for more updates.
I honestly expect Celestia to teleport right to Twilight's house as soon as she reads that letter. Knowing the bomb that just got dropped.
7829202 there are only 2 restraining order stories that are good in my opinion. There's one where sci-twi I got a restraining order on flash for a bunch of weird stuff and the other one is buck cake
I see an over abundance in these women in the question stories where the human just plays off pinkies behavior as completely normal like oh it's just her there's nothing wrong with this complete violation of personal space and privacy. I really want to see someone get a restraining order against her just to see what happens. But, I cannot do that myself since I am horrible at writing. :(
7829965 I was referring to a thread I saw, that offered up the idea that, in response to the "Mane Six Reacting to Human with Violence" trope, the human sues them, with charges of assault, battery, attempted murder, wrongful imprisonment, torture, unlawful sapient experimentation, and sexual assault. All with overlaying factors of being hate crimes fueled by racism.
MAKE LONGER CHAPTERs!!!!
7830304 Well, lets send the idea to the anon gods and hope for the worst :)