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Nurarihyon


I love to read stories, and I try to write things that I would enjoy to read. I am on an inordinate amount of time, so if you feel like talking, or asking something, pm me and I'll respond quickly.

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“I’ll just have to tell him later, but I have absolutely no idea what metal he’s talking about.”
I shook my head as I sat down at my dining table and began to rip open the box. The issue with the metal would be one for another day.

i wanna know too because there was no mention of metal in the conversation between your Mc and his friend

“I’ll just have to tell him later, but I have absolutely no idea what metal he’s talking about.”

Honestly, I have no idea what metal is being talked about, either, since there wasn't anything mentioned about it.

i assume the rings or box is metal or somethin

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Sorry. That was a bit from the rough draft I forgot to remove. I've fixed it now, I think.

7235248 By deleting the chapter?

[edit] Never mind; it's back up.

As long as there's a new chapter I don't care just please continue the story

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There's one in editing now.

Ah, Batbloom; tried and true... Still, I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapter, as I've really and truly enjoyed these last two... And I'm sincerely hoping she doesn't discover Human Transmutation, even though I can already imagine that it's going to lead to AB peering through the Gate of Truth... I wonder if Homunculi are going to be created...

Yeah, I can so see AB trying to raise the dead soon. Hmm, been a while since I've seen a Xanth reference, wonder how well that universe would do as a crossover.

I would say well done on the shock of facing death for the first time. it's quite convincing to me, anyway. Enjoying this story so far, eagerly awaiting more unread chapters to transmute into more read chapters.

Is the chess game of the gods back on?

7275511 It depends on what you mean by the chess game of the gods. The senior Demons are god like, but they get bored, so they gamble on the actions of mortals, as the actions of mortals are the only things that they can't predict.

Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update please and thank you

7381041 Sorry. I'm at a summer camp for work. I'll see what I can do though

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I believe, GrandSpear, that the answer to your question is no. Nura, I assume that your fic is not meant to be included in the group "The Chess Game of the Gods"?

"me reading what ponies eat"
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Rather glad to see an update, the comedy made it worth the wait.

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I know, right? Why can't they use this explanation as verbatim for any Human in Equestria story?

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DITTO!!!!!:yay:
WOOOOOOOOOO!!!:yay:
also the chapters are too short hope you fill-it up more for each chapter!:twilightsmile:

“Well, um, Humans are omnivores, so we can eat a lot of things. We can eat several types of fruits, grains and vegetables, though there are certainly some types of plant matter we can’t eat, such as grass and hay. We also eat meat, in fact meat is a major part of our diet.”

Sorry if I sound like a prat. But I get so miffed about authors saying that meat is a major part of a humans diet. It's not. It's a minor part of our diet.

Author, I want you to think, really think about how much meat you eat in a week vs. how much fruit, veggies, or anything else.

7583522 does pizza count as meat because if so then its a big factor of my diet and by big i mean BIG!

I thought you were dead man don't scare me like that I thought this story would never be updated every again

7583522 I apologize for the misunderstanding, but when I say major, I meant important. Yes humans can survive without meat, however we are built to eat meat AND plant matter. Strictly speaking, the body cannot work at peak efficiency without some meat in a person's diet. You are correct that in terms of quantity the majority of humans don't eat a lot of meat in relation to everything else, but they still eat it as a vital part of their diet, and when speaking to a (presumed) herbivorous society, any meat is more than they are used to.

Also, I'm the wrong person to ask about meat intake, I eat an average of 1.5 to 2 pounds of meat a day, sometimes more.

Okay, 2 things. 1, when Twilight learns about Aaron's book, the resultant scene will be hilarious. 2, I wouldn't mind crossing over with this at some point.

HiE/FMA crossover fic? Sign me up. :yay:

Is this a Displaced fic?^_^

Taking bets here, which will Twilight be more enthralled by: Aaron, or his book?

I imagine twilight may be trying to do alchemy herself...

dont teach twilight alchemy just dont it wouldnt end well

Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter

I shook my head, “Know I don’t. In fact I’m only learning myself.”

Can you replace the 'Know' with 'no?'

Demon E(A/R)TH

HOLY CRAP, THAT'S A XANTH REFERENCE! It's been AGES since I even though about that...!

Also:

It contains all of the knowledge of Amestrian alchemy and Eastern Alchestry

It should say "Alkahestry"

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Good sir, I would be more than willing to embark on a crossover with you at some point in the future.

Oooooh, he's good.

I want someone to write an anon story or something where the guy gets restraining orders on pinkie and others

Lead = LEED = Present tense verb, meaning "to go first."
Led = LEHD = Past tense verb of the above.
Lead = LEHD = A heavy metal.

So when you say something like, "Twilight lead them into the library," it's pronounced "Twilight LEED them into the library," which isn't right at all.

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7829124 I think I saw that idea before...

This is really good, I can honestly say I want to read more. The way this story is going is really intriguing and I can't wait for more updates.

I honestly expect Celestia to teleport right to Twilight's house as soon as she reads that letter. Knowing the bomb that just got dropped.

7829202 there are only 2 restraining order stories that are good in my opinion. There's one where sci-twi I got a restraining order on flash for a bunch of weird stuff and the other one is buck cake
I see an over abundance in these women in the question stories where the human just plays off pinkies behavior as completely normal like oh it's just her there's nothing wrong with this complete violation of personal space and privacy. I really want to see someone get a restraining order against her just to see what happens. But, I cannot do that myself since I am horrible at writing. :(

7829965 I was referring to a thread I saw, that offered up the idea that, in response to the "Mane Six Reacting to Human with Violence" trope, the human sues them, with charges of assault, battery, attempted murder, wrongful imprisonment, torture, unlawful sapient experimentation, and sexual assault. All with overlaying factors of being hate crimes fueled by racism.

MAKE LONGER CHAPTERs!!!!

7830118 I now want somebody to either put in effort for this or takeaway make a green text and I can try to edit it

7830195 definitely pinkie would be sued for some things. Namely including: harassment (a repeat offense) psychological torture/abuse stuff like that, maybe being a public nuisance. Oh! And the welcome parties are always in the person in question's home, so breaking and entering, and other things that could be filed under that. And when celestia says they're not guilty because they're the elements of harmony instead of making like "Rainbow Dash Kills You" and suing celestia for nepotism, shit about dischargement, wrongful imprisonment (of course because it's a new creature better lock it up and chain it down without knowing anything I mean we stuck the word Ambassador from our culture sure others have all done the same right?)
We can make something of this. Maybe an anon story where each chapter Anon sues a character for whatever reason.
This will happen.
It has to.
TL;DR: pinkie is invasing celestia is an advocate for nepotism and we need to make this into a flutterape-styled story (one fetish guess a chapter in flutterape, one lawsuit a chapter in this)
-gebble

7830195 That sounds like a marvelous idea, one that I would love to see occur.

7830304 Well, lets send the idea to the anon gods and hope for the worst :)

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