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Uncle Smiles


Been getting a weird vibe lately. Disease, dispair and distrust. A sinister cloud of looming uncertainty.

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if this is a winter solider story I will fav and like it

You have my attention, liked and faved:trixieshiftright:

7220651 I just watched Captain America Civil War, it takes place not long after the end of the Movie.

Русский? (Russian?)

Некоторые моменты вызывают вопросы, например лишние линии или отсутствие некоторых букв, потому хотелось бы узнать. (There are questionable places that lack some syllables or have more than there is in translated version, so i'd like to know)

7220943 I might've forgotten what the English some things were and well, it the first time I use Russian so bare with me.

I'll fix it when I have time

7220953
Mstiteli Arestovani. - forgotten "I", there is no "Ы" in english, so it's impossible to repeat.
Vy v nedelyu iz-za boleye na arendnuyu platu, mudak! - incorrect altogether, it would sound like: "Vy prosrochili platu na nedelyu, mudak!"
YA bol'noy chelovek - Ya terpeliviy chelovek - If what i read in translate is correct, then this will be the thing you wanted to say.

If you are not russian speaker, that it's surprisingly accurate, i applaud you.
P.S. - Yes, i am russian. FOR MOTHERLAND! :pinkiecrazy:

7220987 then you wouldn't mind in helping me translate things in Russian?

Ben had lived in the Motherland for some time.

Here we go, the winter soldier vs Shining, placing bets now.

Mine is on the Winter soldier xD

7222516 *takes 100 dollars out of wallet and place it on the betting table* same bet right here

Shining better not cheat with his shield spell and it better be fair or i will lose mah shit

I like it, I'll keep an eye on this, I'm just glad it isn't a displaced story.

7222516 It's NOT Bucky, this is a completely different Hydra soldier, it even says so in the description.

Urgh, another story where Shining Armor act impulsively. I mean, I'm fine with him being protective with his little sister, but the concept is overused by now.

7223068 He's not going to act that way forever. He did just find his sister, that was kidnapped six days prior and was being held by a stranger.

so far I love the story keep up the good work :)

7223303 so? His reaction to someone tenderly carrying her in a warm coat bridal style was still retarded. If I had a brother that stupid I'd have him shipped to an asylum not as a captain of a football team, never mind a security force.

He needs to beat the ass of every Royal Guard that gets in his way.

7228342 Shouldn't be to hard, as the royal guards are a complete joke.

These chapters are to short dammit. I want to see shining armor get his butt handed to him!

I know the feeling dude,.... Dark souls 3

7234624 honestly, you're not the only one.

*<>*so who's going to go after him ......

I love this story dude keep it up :)

>>Been a while since I've seen one of these stories.... Also when is the next update?

when will the next chapter be out?

Wow... You made a frozen reference

I was trained to withstand the harsh elements and the cold never bothered me anyways.

How much you wanna bet AJ and RD are gonna take meeting him the wrong way, and get their ass's handed to em.

7553661 YES! Make it happen! We didn't see shiny boy get his butt kicked so let's see their's!

Yes I was waiting so long thank u thank u thank u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I'll agree he reacted more... Aggressively that could be explained away.
But it is an understandable reaction to immediately 'hate' the person carrying your missing sister.
I will, however, also say that he should have out her safety first and THEN attacked Ben.

I just hope the wait for the next chapter is shorter.

I could understand if the chapter was longer but it was short so yeah

So RB and AJ attacked Ben and failed miserably

I just hope he doesn't kill Pinkie for the party. Also new chapter please.

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