In his average day life turned upside down, will Nick be able to survive in this new world after his less then pleasent arrival? Or will his inexperience with other magic users and the strang mark on his hand be to much for him to handle?
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This was a very eventful chapter! I laughed my butt off on the ending. And I loved how Bill interacted with not only the celestial sister's but Faust herself! Looking forward to the next chapter
GOD DAMMIT!!!! This chapter does not have enough words to satisfy me
So you update every 3 in de morning now?
Great chapter
Damn, I wanna kill that Steel guys. Fucking monster, or are you the real monster by making him? Hmmm... meh. Anyway love the story and now we wait for the next chapter! Can't wait for moar!
Quick! Que the 80's porn music! Oh, also this update was great! Short, but great.
We want more as well as Nicks abilities
7258355 Make sure it's cheesy porn music. and ya great chapter
7259545 you kidding me? It's so cheesy that it deserves the porno stache.
1. GOD FUCKING DAMIT YOU BITCH.
2. I shal be keeping an eye on this story.
7259695 YES!
7260165 I'm completely lost on this conversation...
7261173
7261827 as most should be sherv.net/cm/emoticons/trollface/shrug-troll-smiley-emoticon.png
7261906 I..... wha...? I mean where the hell did the 80's porno music and porn stash come from?
7261982 I don't remember but i'm looking
7265077 turnips.
7265098 Wat. What does that mean?
7265185 idk, I guess I must have worded it wrong. he has a heighten learning capacity. what could take someone days or weeks to learn he could in just a few hours. and he can remember it a lot easier.
7265205 Oh, and I got an alert from this reply.
7265384 non of the chapters have been edited yet. it could be worse you know? at least it's small stuff like this instead off *shudder* Dark Magic Attack...... trust me. go give the first paragraph a read and tell me this is bad. and hell yea, Mulan was one of my favs graoing up.
Iron. Fist. Not. Will. He. Was. Banished.
You really need to learn how to capitalize names.
7265411 Dark magic attack? What's that?
Also, It's not bad, it's just... you aren't that good with capitalization, and have some errs in regards to other words/sentences.
I watched Mulan quite a bit when I was, like, 5-9. I liked it.
7265543 good lord you have no idea I keep making that mistake. as in every other time I write his name I have to backspace and put Fist instead of Will. just imagine the cluster duck it will be when Iron Will IS introduced.
7265599 Kill off Iron Fist by then.
7265602 I plan on doing something like that, but I'm not sure if I wanna go the white beard rout where he dies like a boss, or he dies in a way that fuels Nick's rage for revenge.
7265647 He's crippled. What is he going to do in his state, mutate into an eldritch abomination and devour Steel? Unlikely. He is unlikely to be able to do much in his state. Though I do have an idea... I'll send a PM to tell you.
7265664 he isn't crippled for long, as Nick said, he is just going to need a few days before he can regrow Iron's legs.
7265681 oh. Well. My eldritch abomination idea still stands, along.with what I mentioned in the PM.
7266097
Oooo Trixie took Twilight's Familiar. Twilight is going to be pissed~... I LOVE IT!
7266127 This is great. Can't wait for more.
7266127 when's de next chapter?
7271138 i'm aiming for a weekly update, so this weekend sometime.
Amazing story so far and if you need an editor I'll be more than happy to help I spend most my time on this website anyway unless I need a computer to edit then I can't help. update soon!
7271169 oh cool
Wait TFS Reference! Oh fuck all kinds of duck!
Wonder what happened
My TFS references are tingling
Yeah, no. That did not come out right at all. Good story tho.