6 months had passed since Anon’s arrival and in that time he had risen through the ranks of the Lunar Guard. Instead of becoming a high ranking member of the Guard he found himself become something higher. He became Captain of Princess Luna’s personal guard.
With his place as her Captain. Anon and Luna grew closer becoming quick friends. With the help of Luna and Celestia, Anon had managed to tame Alpha as not only his pet but also his friend. But unknown to Anon a great darkness was growing very close to his friends. A darkness he would not be ready for.
And that darkness was Tia's cake storage room
XD this was so short but fitting with the style your writing this. I agree with others that this first few chapters are rushed but I understand why your doing it. Ether way each there own and I'm still having a good time reading it like many others. ^^