Hugs and Snuggles

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It's time to unwind with a nice relaxing book of puppy love. Come my children and gather at the fireplace for a bedtime story.

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The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #1 · May 14th, 2016 · 1 · ·

For your first story on here, not bad and also welcome! But I would like to know more about these charicters, get a bit of backstory and all.

TheHeartsSisters

TheHeartsSisters #2 · May 14th, 2016 · · ·

7215136 This is not my first story. It is, however, my first completed story. This is my first story and it's not finished yet but it should help you get some background on these two lovebirds.

The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #3 · May 14th, 2016 · · ·

7215147 Ah, my bad. I read through the Author's notes a bit too fast. Sometimes that does happen with my reading speed.

TheHeartsSisters

TheHeartsSisters #4 · May 14th, 2016 · · ·

7215149 No prob

arcanelexicon

arcanelexicon #5 · May 15th, 2016 · · ·

Pretty sweet fic.

As for things to improve on: I think you may need to change foul to foal (from you're such a little foul to you're such a little foal)

TheHeartsSisters

TheHeartsSisters #6 · May 15th, 2016 · · ·

7216107 Oh my, thanks for seeing that. I can't spell even the simplest of words to save my own life

Lazydrill

Lazydrill #7 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

Oh my lord... only if there was a fireplace instead of a night light! That was so sweet though!

TheHeartsSisters

TheHeartsSisters #8 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

7297398 I said there was a night light?! Wow, Ruby is a little foal.

Lazydrill

Lazydrill #9 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

7298024 Night light.. Oops. I meant just the small light that was turned on... Sorry about that. I forgot English used that as a small light for kids/foals... Sorry about that!

TheHeartsSisters